My days are sprinkled with your, Fairy dust,
My nights are filled up with a dream.
Time will wait for no man, yes it is true ,
But I will always wait for YOU.
Chorus:
Can you hear me?
Are you near me?
Can you touch me with your love?
Wishing together on the, stars above,
Can you touch me with your love?
You are my sunshine, and you are my light,
You are the easing of my pain.
Tell me you love me, and tell me to heed.
Cause in your arms I've found the love I need.
Chorus:
Days go by and women cry,
Young men run and old men sigh.
It's YOU who shields me from the storm,
And from life's saddness I am torn.
My oh My! These are marvelous lyrics Walt! I'm humming my own tune to it, and it sounds great. Get it published! Love to know who you wrote it for;-)She has you wrapped up;-)
Oh yes... it is excellent and I can hear it already even without music because the sentiments and flow are so strong. As others have said, you must get this up and running. It's got such a great vibe and beat. Love, Kate xx
With her love, care and protection you shall re-stitch yourself with the thread of romantic passion. Sadness shall not be able to penetrate the fortress she will built with the power of love. Well done dear Warlt
Great poem/song as it has all the elements that make the lyrics come alive.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
THIS is good. I usually have a difficult time with song/poems because for some reason they just don't click for me. I suppose it is the way you read it that's the key. But THIS one struck a cord deep within . . . Good stuff, man . . .
Dear brother, I read this one three times and can't keep out of my head the Beetles tune "...when I'm sixty-four..." even I started with the fisrt lines and it did!!!!!!!
Sixty-four, so long long time ago, want to swap ages?
Georg
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
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If Not....she wants you too :)
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Love looks good on you!!! I think she already has touched you with her love: it shows. :) Well done, and congratulations!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Christine
Larry
May the two people this song is about sing this song soon in perfect harmony!!
Pst: IF they can find the right key...lol...yes I think you KNOw she loves you!!
Love Tinka
Young men run and old men sigh.
Now these lines could be another great song in themselves! Keep on writin and singin, Salty Walt.
SO wonderfully put...your words would melt many a women and make her smile!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Fee
Sixty-four, so long long time ago, want to swap ages?
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D