Don’t tell me, they’re always free.
Never a pittance for me to flee.
Are they real or fantasy?
That is up to you and me.
Do you dream?
Do you soar to heights you would never reach,
In waking times?
Are you one with the spirit called Wind?
Where have you been?
Are the Rings of Saturn known to you?
Are you among the few?
Aborigines tell of tales, to put a bit of wind in our sails.
Where in the universe have you been?
Pray tell?
Some of my dreams are so "real" that it sometimes takes me awhile to realize they were dreams and not reality. Your verses give me pause for thought, Walt. Love and peace,
Incredible poem. Dreams ... definitely real. I think it's all about how one incorporates them into one's life whether they stay in the realm of desire or become an extension of one's being.
T a n t a l i z i n g ~ !! Love the form. How you managed to get so much across in so few words. Varying line lengths somehow make the questions you pose more effective. B r a v o !!
Love this Walt!
A deep profound write!
WE can go where we want to go, in mind, heart and thought!
as our spirits take flight...
I hope much will be RIGHT!
Write On!
Glad you are here!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
I've been stuck in the woods with a tribe of earthling wees, searching for new growth on a particular Maple, that once its branches burst in full bloom, and the branches reach closer to the roof, I can escape! I can escape to another body, you say? Will I still be recognized as "MA!"
LOL!
Enjoyed your pen, Walt...it made me dream dreams!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Have you ever dreamt that you were flying
Like superman in the movies
and it was so realistic, that you wake when
you suddenly start falling?
I often confuse that with a out of body experience.
Peace be with you
I don't want no out of body experience, because being that old maybe lose myself in the beyond and can't find my way back, then I will be looking over your shoulder all the time, how about that?!
Not since I had a 107 degree fever when a kid - I'd love to have one on those mornings when my lower back is just killing me!
[I'd also take a pill but can't get any] Not looking forward to the BIG ONE -
Sounds like an over dose of lysergic acid diethylamide. Never experienced anything this weird. The only bad experience I have ever had was from an anesthetic called ketamine. I was given that when I had an 8.5 hour surgery a few years ago. But it was not an out of body experience. Just disorientation, double vision, nausea and a complete lack of physical coordination. I don't want anything like that again. Can't relate to this one personally Walt. This was just an idea wasn't it? Jon Michael Willey
This composition leads me on to ponder on metempsychosis and interplanetary colonization of souls' "Out of Body Experiences". I like the esoteric message revealed through its exoteric rings of ideas and questions.
Thank You for sharing this poetic-philosophic flower.
Well, I can honestly say I did have one out of body experience but in all honesty it was after smoking some of the best weed to come out of the sixties...still scared the hell out of me at the time. Now as for dream world drifting...done a lot of that too but usually left me with great feelings and happy memories.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Regis
God bless you. Kathy
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Quite unique and intriguing.
Fantastic offering~wishing you a wonderful upcoming blessed holiday.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
A deep profound write!
WE can go where we want to go, in mind, heart and thought!
as our spirits take flight...
I hope much will be RIGHT!
Write On!
Glad you are here!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
LOL!
Enjoyed your pen, Walt...it made me dream dreams!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Mind cremated and scattered upon the oceans wide!!
An excellent thought provoker this!!
Love Tinka
Cheers,
Dan
Thought provoking excellence, very well penned - BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hummmm I Say...
I Think I Have This From Time To Time
But I Fall Back To Sleep ;)
Embrass'
Vickie
Like superman in the movies
and it was so realistic, that you wake when
you suddenly start falling?
I often confuse that with a out of body experience.
Peace be with you
William
Georg
[I'd also take a pill but can't get any] Not looking forward to the BIG ONE -
Good to read you...
This composition leads me on to ponder on metempsychosis and interplanetary colonization of souls' "Out of Body Experiences". I like the esoteric message revealed through its exoteric rings of ideas and questions.
Thank You for sharing this poetic-philosophic flower.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Fee
Fun read.
Thanks, ~D.