Just When (poem) by Walt Hardester on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Salty Walty lill'brother of mine, when life persist on twisting my tail I grab a crate of Coors, tell life to go suck, and drink as I look at the seagull's trying not to muve as they fly, the lazy sea waiting for the sun to come down...and when that's done, I go get me another crate. Cheers brother!

Georg

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 26, 2008

As you face it/them, he will help YOU through it once again!
My thoughts and prayers are always with you my Sweet Kind CAring Friend!
Write On! It's a blessing in disguise!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Walt, what a powerful last two lines. Wow!

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Know that feeling old buddy but all we get is one step at a time.

fee

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Another character building day, aye.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

I always thought life here is just a "Pit Stop"
On our way to paradise, so we must do the best we can
while weare doing our time here
Good to see you back Walt

Peace
William

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Yep, you're right, but the sun does shine and the dawn comes each day. Hang on. Eileen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

I hear you - trust me, Walt, know all too well - you are in my prayers -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Chilling picture, heartbreaking write, Walt; you are ever in my prayers/thoughts!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Yes it is reality, but you know, writing takes us to another plane..and that my friend is what keeps us all sane!!!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Let us wait for the return of Jesus to wipe out evil from this earth- Great work

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

it ends when we leave this earth for the next phase Walt, so suck it up and do the best you can for yourself,while here!...ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

We have to somehow learn to brush it aside, I know it is easier said then done Walt but it either that or live in misery the rest of our life. No one knows how the other lives dear. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

You're sadness pierces my heart, and the pain shows through your words. May better times come your way.

Mary

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Ups and downs, they come and go. That is life, if it would always be the same it would not be good for us. We need to learn from strife and worship God for his blessings.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

I don't know what trials or strife you face, but your poem shows a very unhappy state. Take each moment by the hand and try to shape it into something good is the best thing each of us can do. The uniform in the photo gave me a "moment" of surprise. I lived during the time of that war and recall Hitler's face as he wore a similar uniform.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Well if you wouldn't wear a Nazi SS uniform in your picture, maybe you would have an easier time with her...Ed

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Let's hope better days lie ahead.