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Wouldn't it be nice!
by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER → (All Poetry by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER)
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This world and it's beings! Everyone is looking for paradise somewhere else!


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Wouldn’t it be nice!

 

 

Wouldn’t it be nice, if we could tell real truth from lies, foolishness from wise, took off our masks, our mean disguise,

brought friend or stranger,  a happiness surprise, made it a daily act, and see how it would impact, on the world as a gesture of the common bond, between us all, that of love so fond, it need not be some simple thing or treasure, just a little pleasure, like hello how are you, or tie a strangers shoe, feed a bird with open hand, or play music in a band, give a little mouse a home, say hello in friendly tone, a helping hand to those in need, like Jesus did, and wash their feet, make a special light, for those, that not so bright, love from the heart, instead the brain, to them that suffer be a Bain, care for all with loving hand, help a child to understand, caress the petals of a rose, hold a little pet more close, dance with every stranger that in town, instead with glower at him frown, help string the neighbours beans, or help with other  means, don’t give up, if there’s no response in kind, some are permanently blind, those are most in need, your heart will reward your deed.

Mistrust and fear, are always near, if we think we’re on the brink, and death with death do link, this place as nice as is,

just a momentary bliss, if we kept this in mind, we wouldn’t be so blind, more understanding we would find, and be more loving and more kind, instead act with deeds, instead our lips, send these prayers, onto heavenly trips, soon our Gods in kind respond, come down from heaven, with us to bond, feel more at home among such love, to live among us, instead above, not need to wait for Eden’s  gate, you’d say it’s right here of late!

 

 

 

30/01/2008


 


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 Reviews of "Wouldn't it be nice!"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Show me a righteous man that never lied and I will show you how many daggers are embedded in his back.
"Woldn't it be nice!" shakes us like a Grand Danois will do with a pissed off Chihuahua in its mouth.
It would be nice, not to be perfec (impossible), but at leat aiming at it?

Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
YES!!! More than nice, perfect, but it can't be cause only God is perfect,and that's why heaven is where it is;-)

luv ya!

ET

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Yes,it would be nice...btw, that is an interesting picture.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
I like this format, it almost reads like a rap song.

Walt

Reviewed on January 30, 2008
WOW, that's a busy airport! Scary to contemplate...what we're doing to Earth. Wouldn't it be nice to not join the ratrace of hurry hurry hurry...a point well stated in these lines, Jasmin; well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Substitute space ships for those airplanes, and that picture is probably mankind's ghastly future after we destroy this wonderful planet we call home.

But it would be very nice, indeed, my friend, if we all did the things you mention - like hello how are you, or tie a strangers shoe, feed a bird with open hand, or play music in a band, give a little mouse a home, say hello in friendly tone, a helping hand to those in need,
and maybe, just maybe, curtail our ever increasing human greed.


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