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Wounded Dove
by Amber V Moonstone → (All Poetry by Amber V Moonstone)
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a response to William Bonilla's Man of Ice Poem.


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"Wounded Dove"

by Amber "V" Moonstone 12/15/07


Silently my mind wandered
Was he done?
Is it over?
Am I dead?

My body was frozen
My mind alive and warm
my blood still pumping
through my wounded heart.

Make him vanish
make him think I am dead
for I will be the one victorious
and he will be wishing he was successful.

I shall lie quietly,
pretending to be gone,
when the moment is right
I will flee into the night.

Did he not know
that you cannot kill
someone who is already dead?
What a fool he is..

Hours alone on that putrid floor
waiting for that ice cold man
to walk out that door.
Now is my chance.

I slowly move my eyes,
looking for a sign
that he has left this scene
wondering if it is time.

The spirit moves me,
I am awake,
I shall sit and then take flight
Off I go into the wind

A wounded dove
nothing to give
sentimental journey
of love gone dark

A fateful hunt
about to embark.
The icy man
will never return

to this wounded dove
and a once
cherished love
that was butchered so easily.

Rising above the ground,
making not a sound,
I hunt all night to find
remorse of a strange kind.

I find his deadly blade
shining under the full moonlight,
ready to pierce his next victim,
only to find my very own child.

Confrontation aborts the kill,
and he reels from my presence,
Confusion invoked violence
striking out once more to me.

My wounded heart cannot feel
anymore pain that he can deal
so now the table is turned
and he is impaled upon his own sword.

author's notes:
William Bonilla's poem, "Man Of Ice", inspired this poem.

Peace, Love, and Light
Amber "V"

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 Reviews of "Wounded Dove"
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Ohhhh! Talk about tuen about being fair play...this poem is full of it.
Awesome. You two work within one write so beautifully even when it isn't intentional.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
deep and dark it is. Lady J

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Great turnaround, love how this builds up, the criminal becoming victim of his own vile deeds....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Did he not know
that you cannot kill
someone who is already dead?

Powerfully sad, Amber.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Amber this is a great write and quiet a compliment to William, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Always to be on the alert and be aware, yet to exceptionally beautiful....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Amber
Your Golden Pen is truly blest
Taking a dark scribble like mine
and turning it into an outstanding
powerful response

Peace & love be with you
William


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Superb poem Amber, you really went deeply into this one with stunning results!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Unfortunate undertones may still be harmonized through the most unique individual experiences ~Evol( )Ted

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Just stunning as can be..
Beware of the icy man...
Stay safe Amber..
Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
eloquently penned, Amber ... a tale of sadness and isolated emotion ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
My goodness an inspiration indeed,,this is excellent, and William I am sure will enjoy it as well.
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
i like the tale you have spun with this poem-alarming in the end

Reviewed on December 16, 2007
This is powerfully penned sadness. Well written, Amber, an excellent response.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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