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Reminiscent Pain
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Pain can be a reminder of how healthy we really are!


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Reminiscent Pain

by Amber "V" Moonstone 2/12/08

The river is melting
just like my thoughts
bringing me to temptations
of reminiscent pain.

You have entered my thoughts,
without warning, you appeared.
I am brought back to tender times
when I was in love with you.

The reality is like the river,
flowing beneath the frigid surface,
that which mirrors my soul
and tempts me with yearnings.

I shall not let my soul melt,
I will not fall into reminiscent pain,
You will not tempt me to become,
trapped beneath that frigid cover.

Never shall I relive that pain
Never shall I love you like that again
Never will I allow my soul to melt
becoming trapped in reminiscent pain!

author's notes: Sometimes pain is a good thing, it always reminds us just how healthy we really are...

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 Reviews of "Reminiscent Pain"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
' The river is melting just like my thoughts'.... ' I shall not let my soul melt' I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
That reminiscent pain provides us with great resolve and strength to rise above it and not be subjected to that pain. Well said.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
I think, no! I know, that when we really love...it never wanes and, if anything, it is remembered as perfection when it wasn't at all, in reality.

Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Pain, sometimes carry with it the fire that cauterize the open wounds.
One most have the fortitude to "no let the soul melt"
A beautiful rendition.

Georg

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Amber I admire your strength and wisdom. Beautifully Done.
Love, Christine

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Strong feelings shared Viv!
NO, Never go back and hurt again!
This poem (at my time right now) was good to read. Thank you
Warmest Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheooxoo

STay Positive, not easy but TRY!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
you make a good point here-well stated

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
A splendid write...

Carole~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Sorry, but I just can't help it....

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
A photograph of spirituality in its truest form, most fascinating! Sometimes pain can stay with us through eternity, love your optimism in this piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
In suffering comes wisdom...love hurts only
when you don't love yourself...I think.
is there no pain?...Yes there is pain and it does
remind you that you are alive ;)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
the pain of love hurts
an outstanding write Amber
Love & peace be with you always

William



Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Excellent writing as always sweet lady,have a wonderful day...Hugsssssssss

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Great message in this, Amber; excellent! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Excellent reminder in inspiring lines, Amber, well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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