Romantic and truly beautiful Amber!

Outstanding romantic poetry as always
peace be with you

William

Ahhhh this is strikingly BEautiful and Intense! I truly love it!
My heart is stirred Ahhhh... SIGH! It just about sounds like a sweet song/lullabye - soothing - to add a chorus or two more...
Much love and Many Warm Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

Very passionate write. I like the way you bring the first stanza back throughout the poem while changing the last line.

Vivianna,
Love Love Love
sighhhh............ahhh yes!!!
I feel embraced within the words of your beautiful poetry of lovers!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Wonderfully expressed. Your words grab the reader by the soul.

Thank you.

Love and peace,

Regis

Romance smiles from your fingertips in this stunning love poem that borders on the sensual side of desire and love.
hugs
Fee

A beautiful write Ambe as I always look forward to your poetry. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Keep that inner strengh shining too. You did very well on this one and it is supreme. Far sightedness to have patience. Stay in love when you know you have a good thing.

Beautiful!
I love the lines about tears

the best teardrops find kisses

'The teardrops slowly dry
to find glistening kisses
amongst the stardust
and the moon.'

WOW AMBER truly beautiful
Thanks
Tuchy

Beautiful breathtaking piece Piece
Excellent imagery and vividness
A brilliant love poem!!
Beautiful writing!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star

Stunning Amber,, and love Manny and your words below....Teardrops and Kisses is an awesome title... take good care :)
Love, Christne

Great poem, as is Manny Moreno's poem and your response to it. Inspiration in communication and the heart speaks for you.

A lovely ode to love!

Breath taking sweet lady,stay safe and well OK...Hugsssssssss

Only a truly lover can discover how deep is the love's well.

Georg

MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Gorgeous poem, Amber; and I love the picture! Absolutely stellar work! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Absolutely beautiful, Amber - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Good one Amber..
stay safe
Ron

Oh My, this is in response to Manny's Response, (my muse has been awakened! Thanks Manny for the spirit driven, lol)

Distant drums are heard,
pounding to the beat of our hearts,
getting stronger and stronger
as the passion rises
climatic shouts of ecstacy
are heard all over the valley

Do not awaken me from this dream,
I shall stay as long as I dare to,
I want to bask in the glory of love
with my spirit warrior,
bubbling like the smoldering volcano,

Abandoning all sensibility,
realizing life's pleasures
and passionate embraces
are all within our reach.

Do not awaken from this dream,
until you have quenched your deepest desires,
and then you shall have me forever!

Amber "V" (5/25/08)

When the night
unfolds
and the stars sing
I rest on my pillow
until I travel
deep into the dreamworld
where she waits
her hand reaching out
holding mine
pulsating with a warmth
engulfing my whole being
in sweet surrender
following her to the waters
that flow under the moonlight
there we sit
together alone
she embraces me
I breath her
scent so sweet
I sigh in adoration
and look into her
seducing eyes
taking me to a place
I have never been to
and we join
in a song of passion
smothering in glorious
motions of firey passion
hearts pounding
in uncontrollable ecstasy
until we explode
in sighs and coos
of climatic
shivers of joy
and then
the morning arrives
and I awake
reach out to hold her
and find
only the rays of the sun
and the dream
she will never know about.

truly beautiful!