Enigmatic Thoughts (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

I very much enjoyed this write - beautiful word choices.

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

And you wrote it so well, I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the first stanza, you could have ended right there and written no further and it still would've been perfect.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

I'm so happy YOU shared it/the depth of your heart!
I loveeeeeeeee this poem!
I feel this is all YOU! BE SAFE! and Enjoy your adventures!
Sorry I didn't see this earlier, but I am trying to get to all your poems I have missed lately!
P.S. There's a REASON for EVERYTHING... The WiTHOUT feelings! You have a plan that must be followed and alone to do it all, must be the ONLY way to really FOCUS on what needs to be done! and I sense YOU WILL! I can't wait...
I am a vessel without a voyage
A vehicle without a map
A Journey without a destination
An adventure without an end.

A lover without a love
A clam without a shell
A ying without it's yang
A light that needs a harbor.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Vivianna,
those are beautiful words captured!
This poem is totally outstanding!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Very nice, I like it!!!!!!!!!! 'A lover without a love'....'A moment lost in time'----------BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE THIS SENTENCES!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Very beautiful thoughts.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Thanks for sharing this oustanding Spontaneuous write
enjoyed much
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

i really like the positive aspect of this rather than the negative it could have been

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Thank you for sharing this very heartfelt and beautiful piece with messages of hope throughout....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

A very inspiring write truly from the heart, well done my friend a great poem!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

...and I hear your poems coming right from your heart,, well done Amber this is touching.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

They are beautiful thoughts. All my spontaneous poems disappear before I can run for the pen and paper. Nice job.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Wonderful....

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

You are that word that has not been written...yet.

Georg

Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

WOW WE Amber you are very gifted great peom
thnk you
Tuchy

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

For writing spontaneously you did a great job. I feel this back and forth and need for more in my life too. 'Like the freedom I now have though but decisions must be made for a happier life If I can find true happiness any more.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

A splendid poem that to me is one of your best! It has a triumphant feel to it, Amber, that is uplifting! ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

So many things but most important a poet with a voice and we hear you loud and clear as you share your beautiful words with us. Thank you for sharing Amber.

Newfie Hugs, Rose