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Milky Way Dreams
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"I love the Milky Way of Dreams"


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"Milky Way Dreams"

by Amber "V" Moonstone

10/17/08

Wandering in the abyss,
telling tales of bliss
Milky Way dreams,
Sending Silvery metallic beams.

Lunar landing,
Voices commanding,
Towers struggle
sensuality smuggle.

Seeking simple pleasures
Finding secret treasures,
planting furtile seeds,
multiplying little deeds.

Running faster than lightning,
away from something frightening,
finding safer ground
lover's finally found.

energy that is bold,
never to be cold,
all consuming fire,
out of muck and mire.

Telling tales of woe,
finding moonlit glow,
tending to this light,
developing sense tonight.

Nightfilled sensuality
touching on morality
finding faulty irregularities
failing simple mentalities

Wandering in the abyss,
telling tales of bliss
Milky Way dreams,
sending Silvery metallic beams.


 

 

author's notes:  I was feeling dreamy and visionary, while playing with words..Hope you liked my experiment...(there is a message here if you look closely you will find it)

Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"




 


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 Reviews of "Milky Way Dreams"
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Ahhh The tranquility of abyss and bliss in it's unity!
Captured beautifully in every line Amber "V"
Love your dreamy Milky Way visions!
A message I received is ENJOY the Moments and don't allow muck and mire to pull you under! With Faith Peace will be found!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Love, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed on October 30, 2008
Cher Ambre,

Votre usage de métaphores dans cette écriture est comme un grand peintre de la palette et pinceau - chaque coup a travaillé de concert pour créer un chef-d'œuvre!


Étreintes et amour,

Lance


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
..perfect photo... dreams never cease.... well done Amber!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
i enjoyed the feel of this--and the title--reminded me of my childhhod home, Milky Way Farm

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
I like the way you play with words, Amber -gene.

Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Beautifully penned Amber.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
I think that your "experiment" was worth experiencing and I am happy that you shared it. Thank you, Amber. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Well done Amber, a good poet goes outside the box, a great poet burns the box...nice fire.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
A lovely experiment in poetic grace. What is life without dreams. May you have many more and may the best ones always come true. (That's a wonderful picture. That old tree would make a great poem--or story.)

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
You're very creative when you're feeling dreamy, Lady Amber! This is soft and tranquil. Love it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Milky Way Dreams - sound marvelous!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Beautifully written, love Holly

Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Beautiful Morning To You Viv,
Your dreamy vision express within word play shoots through the poetic canvas like a comet gracing the heavens...
Lovely Cascade of Dancing Words Poetess
Much Love To You Always
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Beautiful poetry...... Amber
Take my hand, take flight with me
guide me through those passionate
imageries, in the Milkyway of your dreams
lets search fo that lost collaboration
Thats secretly wedged between the stars
waiting to be discovered and created
Love & Peace be with you

"D'Artagnan"

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Lovely title and melodious poem.
"Abyss" and "bliss" together create intriguing imagery.

Axilea

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
I love it Amber and I am sure if we want love and we are patient we will realize it is as close as can be, all we have to do is reach for it, it will indeed light our way into happiness. A beautiful way to start our day. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
Amber, beam me up....please?

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Love the flow and the rhyme. Lovely work.

Reviewed on October 16, 2008
I am lost by the beauty of your words, Amber!! Simply magical! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Amber,

Your "playing with words" was absolutely beautiful!

Mary


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