"Milky Way Dreams"
by Amber "V" Moonstone
10/17/08
Wandering in the abyss,
telling tales of bliss
Milky Way dreams,
Sending Silvery metallic beams.
Lunar landing,
Voices commanding,
Towers struggle
sensuality smuggle.
Seeking simple pleasures
Finding secret treasures,
planting furtile seeds,
multiplying little deeds.
Running faster than lightning,
away from something frightening,
finding safer ground
lover's finally found.
energy that is bold,
never to be cold,
all consuming fire,
out of muck and mire.
Telling tales of woe,
finding moonlit glow,
tending to this light,
developing sense tonight.
Nightfilled sensuality
touching on morality
finding faulty irregularities
failing simple mentalities
Wandering in the abyss,
telling tales of bliss
Milky Way dreams,
sending Silvery metallic beams.
author's notes: I was feeling dreamy and visionary, while playing with words..Hope you liked my experiment...(there is a message here if you look closely you will find it)
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Captured beautifully in every line Amber "V"
Love your dreamy Milky Way visions!
A message I received is ENJOY the Moments and don't allow muck and mire to pull you under! With Faith Peace will be found!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Love, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
STay Positive!
Votre usage de métaphores dans cette écriture est comme un grand peintre de la palette et pinceau - chaque coup a travaillé de concert pour créer un chef-d'œuvre!
Étreintes et amour,
Lance
Regis
hugs
Fee
Your dreamy vision express within word play shoots through the poetic canvas like a comet gracing the heavens...
Lovely Cascade of Dancing Words Poetess
Much Love To You Always
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Take my hand, take flight with me
guide me through those passionate
imageries, in the Milkyway of your dreams
lets search fo that lost collaboration
Thats secretly wedged between the stars
waiting to be discovered and created
Love & Peace be with you
"D'Artagnan"
"Abyss" and "bliss" together create intriguing imagery.
Axilea
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Your "playing with words" was absolutely beautiful!
Mary