The Crack In The Earth (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 25, 2008

Special piece here. Well done.

~W~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 21, 2008

Beautifully penned/illustrated, Amber; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

nicely developed analogy, Amber ... deeply introspective emotion ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Oh the heartache that leaps off the page, filled with such sadness. Yet, in search of harmonic bliss to soothe the hurt that came before. Passionate deliverance....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Very powerful and bittersweet poem, Amber!
We need some heavenly glue for such cracks!
You're in my thoughts and prayers!
Beautifully written!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

A sad, powerful and profound piece!
Love to you dear heart!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

powerful breathtaking piece
Pensively sad!!
Love the metaphors!
Sending you Peace Love and Light....Morning Star

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Thoughts born inside a purification tent, when one doesn't need to lie to conformity but open oneself and search for the fracture holding the wounded heart.
Magnifique piece of poetry touching the realms where a Shaman can have the answer to the question to where "it" is.

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

I like the way you brought such pure and warm symbolism into your heart with this poem that is lovely indeed
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Outstanding melancholic write, I love it, the photo is just perfect.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Quite a powerful piece, Amber.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Amber, yes this is sad...but also breathtakingly beautiful!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Beautiful writing sweet lady as always..please be well and always safe...Hugsss

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

"I search for that crack
every day of my life,
with the hopes that I can seal

The Crack that lives within

My Heart".

Your words melt as I read them...Search and you shall find.
Love,Christine

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Amber--somehow I think we are sisters at heart. How often I run to the mountains. You once told me "Run, RaeLynn, Run, go outside and ground yourself. You will feel an uplifting I can guarantee it!!!"

Go find your crack and share it with us.

Peace--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

beautiful write, however sad in the end

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Dear heart, I search for that crack daily, too! An outstanding write we all can realte to!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

I've felt that same pain many times Amber...it's a hard one, but I believe that you'll be able to seal that crack once and for good... very well expressed, love Holly

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Beautifully composed Amber
is this an excellent heartfelt piece
Thanks for this enjoyable Gem
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

A lovely poem, Amber, with mood and deep feeling. I, too, have known my moments of loneliness, and my method of dealing with it is to change the directions of my thoughts and get physically busy doing something. I'm a fan of the late Norman Vincent Peale. One of his quotes was: change your thoughts and you change your life. I have learned to love my own company, which was a great hurdle against feelings of lonelines. Blessings to you, my friend.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on November 19, 2008

Amber, such a touching, moving search for happiness. -gene.