A Journey Too Late (Karena Series)
by Amber "V" Moonstone
1/15/09
The journey was long and tiring,
each evening Tumas fell into deep sleep,
I was to guard our safety and belongings.
The nights proved even longer than the days.
During the second week of our journey,
Tumas was strong enough to ride longer,
and I was able to sleep a bit more.
I call to my Eagle Spirit guide for strength.
Upon arriving at the outskirts of our village,
The morning sun was just about to rise,
I dismounted my horse to view my home,
Overwhelming feeling of doom fell upon me.
The village looked deserted,
no fires burning,
or horses in the village,
or warriors standing guard.
I looked at Tumas as he looked at me,
We knew, we were too late.
"Tumas, where have our people gone?"
"Karena we must face the worse possibility"
I ran as fast as I could toward my dwelling,
As I stood in the doorway praying and
Asking the Great Spirit to spare my children
My answers were unfounded.
There was not a sign of life anywhere,
The dwellings were stripped bare,
nothing was left behind.
This was a good sign for sure.
At least my people had time to flee,
and with the grace of the eagle,
and the mercy of the Great Spirit
they are all safe.
"Karena, we must go now, toward the east,
The eagle is flying low, he beckons us
we must follow him and get to safe ground,
I feel danger here, now, let's go, now"!
They run as fast as they can,
Mount their horses and gallop
toward the rising sun.
Karena looks back with tears in her eyes.
"Please Eagle Spirit guide, and Great Spirit,
bring us to safe ground,
lend us your wisdom and fortitude,
and allow us to have the opportunity
to share the rest of our lives with our beautiful children. They have waited so
very long for their father to return."
December 1609
Karena Eagle Medicine Woman
Steve
Be always safe,
Karen
Your Novel will be a wonder gift to the literay world Amber. Your story episodes (though I lost my chapter place) your story episodes are the quality of a movie series, or a full blown movie. I would love to see it myself, a saga even...."Dances with wolves" was one of my all time favorite loves stories & "Karena Series" is just as beautiful!!
Much Love To You Always Beautiful Den Sister
Embracing You With Love
Vickie
tiring generations before US!
Love this series Viv (Amber)
This speak of FAMILY LOVE and DETERMINATION!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and WARMEST of Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Love,
Eileen
Your friend, J'nia
knowing sadly (from the history of why we're here) that
the journey of hope is ever too late. -gene.
Fee
This poem is so interesting, this could be extended into a wonderful story!!! Enjoyed this!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
You take us back by looking forward. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
love,
Christine
Love,
Becca~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love it so much I'm adding it to my library~ :)
In the Karena series
Most enjoyable write Amber
Love & peace be with you
William
Newfie hugs, Rose
Georg