Abyss Of Loneliness (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 1, 2009

SO TRUE...WHEN LOVE COMES ALONG ONE SHOULD NOT BE AFRAID OF IT...BUT EMBRACE IT...OTHERWISE...IT PASSES YOU BY. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 17, 2009

Wow! What a fabulous write, Amber. There's a world of passion poured out in your words. Bravo!

Anna

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 25, 2009

LET that PASSION Pour!
WELL DONE! and STRONGLY FELT!
"ABYSS OF LONELINESS" is such a SAD place to be!
An Adventure is what that "SOUL" needs!

WRITE ON!
Love and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo SMILE!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 24, 2009

Beautifully written Amber
From a passinte heart
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Lovely writing sweet lady...keep smiling OK..Hugss

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Wonderful insight and wisdom in this poem. Deeply felt. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

Your perceptions are keen to know this about someone! Superb poem with a wisdom message...ET

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

Viv! Truly an emotive poem!
Endless Love...True Love...Twin Flames of Love...
Soul Mates...Love!!! Love!!! Love!!!
Our innately immeasurable quality of life, I cannot imagine anyone to turn their back on its fulfilling beauty...Love completes us...
It would be the darkest �Abyss of Loneliness� that is for certain...
Much Peace & Inspirations & Lotz of LOVE!! :)
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

What crazy fool forsakes a true love,
knowing that paradise is a breath away,
killing the lilies of the field of pleasure,
with ignorance of a deaf ear.

I have asked that question many times, Amber. I appreciate the perspective that you share via your verses here. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

The third stanza speaks of truth. This is lovely...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

Sadly, so many cheat themsleves in life...we need to devour what we can as life it just a breath....Amber this is an awesome write!
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

Deeply touching! You have captured the inner feelings of some who are afraid to take a chance to love again. Live and let live, who knows what tomorrow will bring1..M

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

great advise

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

wisely penned addition to your wonderful poems ...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

A very beautiful summation of what love and life is truly about.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Beautiful write my friend, it's great to read you again, so good to be back at the den. Your poem touches the heart and emotions of the reader, true love can endure and weather the storms of life. Well done, enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Far too many are afraid,
was there once or twice myself. Good Poem.

Legacy

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

This is beautiful Amber . Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

A crazy fool afraid to take a leap. Great write!

Lin

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Hi Amber, sometimes love is not enough, at least that's what we tell ourselves after a while... thank you for sharing this... stay strong...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

True love should never be foresaken.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

lovely writing and wise words of advice

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

I like the way you capture the intimacy of fleeting moments in time where love is involved, for although the physical love can be as brief as a few minutes the spiritual side of love can be eternal. Nice one Amber.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

So very true, Amber. Wise write.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Like a desperate drop of rain falling, no matter how many others are there, to her, it is a solitary and sorrowful abyss falling.

Georg