DeFragmentation of Life (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

You've melded thoughtfulness with playfulness to bring more than the normal depth to the page. Bravo!

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

Very, very clever and insightful. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

Very clever ideas and images woven together seamlessly in delightful plainspeak, Amber. The short lines as statements certainly capture the raw energy, verve and momentum of such defragmentation swirling and congealing together. I especially like how you've inverted our expectation where de- usually means to detract, dismantle (whereas here obviously it is the opposite, as is consistent with the root word's meaning). And how the first two stanzas are mirrors of each other. A rapturous helter-skelter, exuberant and breathless, that instills a sense of invincibility. I like! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

You took us there! Standing ovation! This is what poetry is supposed to look like! Embryonic. Merged from the womb soulful poetry pouring from the slit, twin souls born into the Light, Amber...nourishing plenty of onward moments, you and he...

Love & Kindredness,
Sage

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

,,words to rebuild one's being...inspired by one whom radiates positive energy :)
Love,Christine

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

beautifully inspired poem! when life is fragmented, hopefully it will come together by the winds of inspiration ...

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

A PERFECT POEM THAT CHEERS 'LOVE'...LOVE THAT VEERS AWAY FROM THE 'NORM' OF HEARTBREAK BUT....THE 'IDEAL' OF EVERLASTING. EXCELLENT! THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

Very unique and origianal and love the tail at the end of the word flow...trails off like into the mystic. Well done.
fee

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

Love the message and the form too.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

Souls entwined like comet's halos and that odd asteroid of broken promises colliding now and then head on, to remind us that our universe does hide secrets...

Georg

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

This title and poem suggest some very profound thinking. An interesting write.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 19, 2009

this is so true Viv...Nothing can divide the soul of love
the sustenance of love's strength truly is
inseparate & immeasurable
Peace & Inspiration
Vickie

Love The Curves :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

Amber,how fantastic it would be! I hope it is real for you! Very artistic too!;-)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

Amber, this is so beautifully written.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

The rapture of two souls joined and each enlightening the other, simply magnificent...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

i agree-this is so much how i feel!

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2009

"Souls entwined for eternity." A description of "love", the true bonding agent of the universe, which transcends all lesser energies prone to chaos and break-up. Wonderful stuff!