Gravitational Pull (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 31, 2009

Very clever. Fun. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

oh there is so much to enjoy about
"Gravitational Pull"
the senses begging...
the emotions sweltering...
hands reaching...
thoughts exploring....
and then making it all happen!
Love & Lust...Deliciously Yummy!!
and Unending!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Jupiter attracted 21 Shoemaker-Levi little small lovers, you, being so eternal enormous, have the gravitational pull of an entire galaxy!

Georg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

Striking art work to your rapturous words Amber. Sometimesd being alone is a great way of appreciating others and knowing the "Why" of them a little better.
Thank you for your review of "Kate". You would adore her Amber. She was christened this past Sunday and her dress was white linen with seed pearls hand-sewn into her bodice and then upon her tiny shoes. She had a beautiful crinolin of fine mesh that she would lift up for eveyone to see at the Baptismal....such a ham.
Misse4d you and I do have a new email address. I'll send it to you in a message.
Love and blessings!Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

...oh my I can feel it!!! Amber this is both creative and sure does pull at the soul..great peom :)
Love Christine

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

... oooo yes... definitely feeling this one, Amber! :)) LOL Peter, too! And Sage... makes me think of Marilyn Monroe in the classic Some Like It Hot... guess some of us do! :)) And the image makes me think of Cosmic Spiders (queue Davie Bowie's Ziggy Stardust) Love the libidinous longitude here, left dangling by a thread. Warm, webby and womby. Oestrogens in ascendancy! :)) xx

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

very cute. LadyJ

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

I got sucked over the event horizon, pulled down into the maelstrom of raining letters and blown out the other end smashijg my face into the right side of the computer. IT must be good. Love the creativity. Great piece:-)

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

You have mastered poetry that appeals to the mind, the heart, the ear and the eye. Damn, you're talented.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

clever!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

I really like the experimental and unique form and the warm message. Beautiful pen Amber.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 28, 2009

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 27, 2009

Intense vertigo dizzy on love and lust...the graphic is hypnotizing and its effect on the libido is a gravitational pull on a lollipop sucking forth the cosmic jaws of salivous lubricious!

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 27, 2009

Hmnnn they do say that absence makes the heart grow fonder so this write brings justice to that old saying and a new look at missing someone from the heart.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 27, 2009

Amber, I too, love the style in which you have written this!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 27, 2009

loved the creativity of the falling letters