Striving For Balance (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 6, 2010

There is much wisdom in these lines Amber. xox

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 6, 2010

"Around you will come a circle of like souls
striving for the exact life you aspire
it is with this circle of souls you will find
true peace and happiness."

This is so utterly true
& I am so glad to have you apart of my life circle
as I am to be apart of yours...embracing love's bounty
Love Vickie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 5, 2010

Step out of your box, take a chance,
jump into life,
find freedom of flight,
learn to listen and really "see"!

... as I'm learning through the self-imposed "freedoms" of NaPoWriMo, exercising unused wings isn't as natural as it might appear when standing on the ledge waiting to "push off", though, during the first few exploratory circuits of the thermals above, the views of once-familiar territories are entirely different when soaring! Greatly motivational exhortations here, Amber! Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 5, 2010

Wise advice, Amber. It seems to really fit into my life at the moment, too. This reads like an omen, but a positive one. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 5, 2010

This is a treasure, Amber. A pleasure to read you now and ever

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

swimming in negativity,
leaves no room for play and relaxation. <---How the world needs to understand the likes.

Top poem V.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

I love the gems that you offer via your verses here, Amber. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

Striving for balance is a fine poem with a great personal message we all can use. The only problem is: it is hard for individuals to practice these virtues when the society itself "preaches" the wrong and opposite values through its media, news, etc. Our civilization NEEDS BALANCE! This is why we all need some "isolation time" (but not as much as I seem to have!)
Take care dear lady, enjoy our spirit, I do...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

We strive everyday to find that perfect balance that improves our lives...great write, Amber.

Blessings, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

"..."Look Before You Leap"..." when seeing the calling eyes of the abyss...

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

Well written, and many wise words to live by. It may be hard to navigate that endless sea of advice, but they do say pretty much the same thing. Surround yourself with happiness, don't dwell on events out of your control, believe in yourself enough to go for what you want and be happy.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

hard to find that balance; but a discipline worth practicing. good advice amber.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

peace & light as war and darkness are both the essence of the universal being ... balance is derived from the willingness to move within the design and by embracing it, transcend its hold (and "see") ...

excellent poem, Amber ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

Definately wise sayings and ideas that we should all do well to heed and try and follow...well done Amber
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Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

I wish I could carry YOU around with me always, Amber. YOU are so smart. I love the way YOU write. I always gain after I read YOU. I wish YOU and your loved ones, a very Happy Easter.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND HAPPY EASTER! LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

this is beautiful and so possitive-i love this!