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Let Go, Trust in The Universe
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Sometimes you just have to let go!


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Let Go, Trust In The Universe

by Amber "V" Moonstone  11/28/10

I will feel you
until my very last breath,
always knowing that I tried,

You were unresponsive,
leaving my heart to yearn,
always knowing that I tried.

Small tokens of attention,
left me breathless,
always knowing that you tried.

In a cosmic world of twin souls,
magnetic energy drawing them close,
always knowing that they both tried.

One without the other,
just isn't good enough,
how long do you keep on trying?

Before the heart becomes sad,
and the soul becomes vacant,
during those moments of trying times.

There comes a time,
when you have to let go,
and trust in the Universe!

Universe hear this plea:

"Universal energy flow through
these two twin souls,
allowing them to unite for eternity to fulfill what destiny has chosen."

Let Go, Trust In the Universe (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 


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 Reviews of "Let Go, Trust in The Universe"
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 3, 2010
Trust that goes across this universe. . . . . .

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on December 3, 2010
yes letting go is the key to opening doors

Reviewed on December 1, 2010
yes...let go & trust in the universe
we cannot have it any other way
this is a powerful piece Viv
it gives sound advice too as we all
should know and realize we cannot make something happen
we can try to achieve is the best we can do
and sometimes in that we receive what we really need
over what we want

The Bounty of You is Beauty
Love Always
Vickie

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
I AGREE...SOMTIMES WE HAVE TO LET GO...AND...LET GOD. HE CAN DO WHAT WE CAN'T. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
mucho wisdom in this superb poem for soul-mates!Beautifully written , Amber!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Clarrissa Moon
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Wow this says it all for me in trying to find my soulmates. After so many years of waiting it is hard to keep tying but I will take this poem as a sign and keep hoping. Thanks BB

Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Beautifully penned from the depths of the soul.

Reviewed on November 29, 2010
trust in the universe seems like a hard request sometimes. great write Amber. :) morgan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Your stanzas are like links in a golden chain, Amber; trying and trying and TRYING to break free of the deadlock that binds. The frustration of energies is palpable and deeply intense - yet your longsuffering and enduring love demonstrates still its faith and trust and overweening PATIENCE, knowing that the Universe will deliver that which is truly willed and intended between two consenting souls. To ACTUALLY let go is to be strong and not weak, allowing faith to become tried, tested and proven to be vitally founded. You have bled your heart and soul onto these pages over long weeks and months past and we can all testify that, yes, you have tried for this with every fibre of your being. Surely, if you are truly twinned, separation must come to an end sometime... for you, I wish it will be sometime soon. Bless you, Amber. You are a woman of unfailing love and unabashed courage. xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Your emotions are heartfelt..trust from within, beautiful Amber~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
interesting prospective-it takes faith either way

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Wishing and praying I guess is trusting the universe too. Very nicely done my Dear Friend.


NAmaste/ Love
Tony

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
listening to that inner guiding voice is often difficult in our
chaotic world...
very nicely scribed, amber!
cg

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
I feel every must-read word of this! I feel the frustration and the reaching for that fullest potential ~ that union. This is gorgeous passionate and accessible.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
i think letting go is akin to a lake where water flows in and out and is constantly refreshed. if the lake were "holding on" as it were, the water becomes stagnant and infested. in order to receive the new, we have to let go of the old and trust that the universe, the flow, will update, refresh and cleanse. great poetry.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Letting things just happen, or just be is often the best way to handle life I think. It is not easy but good things come to those who wait. Well said.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
we definitely should trust in the universe to attract us to the forces that pull us apart ... only then can we be whole ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
I like to think of it as God opening the next door. A nice message, Amber. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
Yearning for togetherness.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
'Leaving my heart to yearn'...'magnetic energy drawing them close'...'before the heart becomes sad, and the soul becomes vacant'--------VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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