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Hotel Luna
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song that inspired this poem:
"Hotel Luna" by Suzanne Ciani

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Hotel Luna

by Amber "V" Moonstone
3/9/11

The sound of the mandolin
brings chills to my heart
so lovely, fresh and invigorating.
I am floating in it's melody.

Waves of restlessness wash over me
I am floating in a sea of unease,
spinning like a funnel
being sucked into the depths of the darkness

It's cold and lonely down here
alone floating in a sea of chaos.
Swirling like a tornado
out of control with sweet abandon.

The mandolin plays on,
and the keys of a piano
begin to play in melodies
of unrequited love affairs.

Sending my soul on another journey
toward the nearest starlight express
wandering amongst the galazy
of exotic notions and desires.

The music plays on, dragging me
along for the ride of my life,
reverberating sounds of angel's laughter
reassuring me that I am on the right path.

Tinkling ivorys, strumming mandolins,
touching my soul with the music of the night's
fantasy while soothing my mind's
restlessness and uneasiness of what is to come.

Living in the moment of this night,
renders me helpless to resist
and transports me to a wonderous land
of love and uninhibitations!

 

Hotel Luna (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 

 
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 Reviews of "Hotel Luna"
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2011
a mandolin eh-well seems easy enough....LOL-lovely poetry
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
a mist beautiful and well written poem, Amber .... luv the content and sentiment ,,,
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
I want to go where the mandolin's music takes you! very beautiful words, Amber
Reviewed by Mindy May
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Bon Voyage, Babe~

Sexy Hugs~
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
beautiful expression of desire and hope
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
When I search for the best I come to your side of the den
To read what I need to jump start me
thank You My Lovely friend
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
You have shared the ambiance of the place and the experience very effectively through your verses here, Amber. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
I listened to that lovely music, can see why it affects you this way. stunning poem
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
A blending together of all of loves sensual, passionate, imaginative ways...Stimulating...
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
Amber, Everything 'meshes' together
and makes it right.
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 12, 2011
beautiful!
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
every room is the honeymoon suite....Morgan
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Moon and music, mandolin strings plucked no less,
send me on the journey with you, Amber,
lift me out of this dull grey morning here
in the tropics; it's been raining on and off all night
but now there's light - moonlight and sunlight - yours.

John
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Amber, The photo is mesmerizing as are your words that play to that special tune :)
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Strange duallisms in this poem, Amber... reminds me a bit of those in Eagles Hotel California, but we still all want to go there, right?! Like a rollercoaster ride, it goes up and it goes down: chaos and charisma united yet counterbalanced. It is a very powerful forerunner of what is to come, perhaps, with your Full Moon poem this month: hang onto your hat!! The largest full moon for two decades is predicted as the moon comes closer to earth than it has done for twenty years... You'll be fit to bust!! Love how the mandolin plays you, Luna. Ride on... xx
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Amber, Hotel Luna sounds like paradise! Maybe I just need to get a room there so I can see what I'm missing...I can feel the music through your words. Living in the moment of the night!!! Right on! Take care my beautiful spirit sister!! Chessly
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
What would you say if I said I want to go there with you.
Love and Peace
Tony
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
book me a room at hotel luna for the weekend, want the starry view and hot-tub as well. damn, this is great amber!! the last stanza is perfect!!!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Beautiful indeed sweet lady...sighhhh ..the photo is lovely...oh my Excellent...Hugsss,much love too you...
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
I love the sounds you create in this poetry, and it's like a guided spiritual meditation for the heart.
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Pushing life to its amorous limits within the confines of this mandolin-inspired songs of love. The verses blended into the others in a wonderful pursuit of amour.
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
What a perfect photo- to also draw us in.
I'm listening to music- from another land.
Beautiful.

John
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
The music of amour can be at times soothing and quieting or can be a rousing battle hymn to push us to our limits...I think you ride both of them in this one...
fee
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Sounds like quite a journey.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
How beautifully this flows and think I may be traveling alongside to enjoy the peace and tranquility...

Be always safe,
Karen
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