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Rudimentary
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Thinking very deeply tonight....


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Rudimentary

By Amber "V" Moonstone
August 1, 2011

Ever evolving
Ever unsure
Forever searching.

One day you wake up
and you find that
life just isn't right.

You try to shut out negativity
but it sometimes seeps in
those cracks that we all have.

We are all incomplete as humans,
but in the spiritual world,
there is a peaceful completion.

Some souls are destined to be whole,
most souls are destined to keep searching
for that one piece that completes them.

It is sometimes within a lifetime,
that completion occurs,
You must be open and ready.


One must live in the moment,
in order to be in alignment
for the possibility of completion.

Is it this lifetime that will serve
as that one time of completion?
Or will you return again and again?

It is all rudimentary.......

 

Rudimentary (c) Amber "V" Moonstone
8/1/11 

 


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 Reviews of "Rudimentary"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2011
Amber, Deja Vu I've had many times---errie feelings
of being somewhere when I know I have never been there!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 9, 2011
Elegantly expressed and wonderfully philosophical!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 7, 2011
Fate is mysterious. Nicely done, Amber. Like your new picture, too.
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 7, 2011
so much to ponder in this life--so much to learn-enjoyed this!

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 5, 2011
Very interesting poem, sure have me thinking, lol. Enjoyed :)

Reviewed on August 5, 2011
Much to consider, well penned.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
RUDIMENTARY...A WAY OF LIFE IN THIS DIMENSION, UNTIL WE ARE 'COMPLETE' AND SAFE...IN HIS ARMS. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
We are so connected Amber! I feel every word that you have written. We just have to live in the moment and try to stay positive even when life didn't turn out like we hoped. I have always believed we all have that one soul mate. Some find them and others are not so lucky. I believe we keep coming back if there are still lessons to be learned. I also believe that we all will experience true love when it is meant to be. You are so beautiful on the inside and out and deserve love, and happiness! I have faith that it will happen for you and this time it will be forever....Hugs to you my spirit sister! :)

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 3, 2011
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 2, 2011
This title is so perfect, thought provoking, yes and how many have thought they had it right?......~ Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
We climb, we fall back, we climb...
will we ever reach Nirvana? Or is here
one shot and then we move to another dimension,
a higher? understanding, and as some say, reward.
Thinking cap definitely on, Amber,
and spirit, as ever, aware.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
Deep thoughts indeed Amber, are we ever complete? or are we forever searching for something more?...much to ponder here~ Hope all is well!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
sometimes it can take eons and lifetimes to return to our origin and move onward ... sometimes, we can accelerate through a wormhole of spiritual mass and reach our selves much quicker ... then again, time is rudimentary ;)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
A lot to think about in this write Amber. I think we search for our true pairing in life and sometimes it is found and our hearts can be content...others must keep on searching though.
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
We are complete when we realize that there is more to life than the material and find one who will give us undying love, and he is ever before us, if we open our eyes. Great poetry

George

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
Alas and drat! Amber. I know all about the cracks in my chink of armor where negativity seeps in and wreaks havoc. All we can do is keep plugging them up and hoping for the best.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 1, 2011
After reading this I felt a sense of urgency.
Was it lacking????
Or did it need packing???

db

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 1, 2011
Amber, I sense a bit of meloncholy in your words. Life is cyclical and it takes great strength at times to get through. Stay strong and positive and shine your light of love and healing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on August 1, 2011
Rudimentary is the learning curve,but rewarding in the end...
unless not learned, then destined to repeat!

Thank You~Amber of V~for this awakening of our senses!!

Lady Vivian


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