honest sentiments expressed well!

I love this piece, and feel the authenticity and longing within your words!
We must dream instead of letting sadness settle in the heart.
There are so many unspoken messages flowing in between and around us it's difficult sometimes to discern...
Love,
Chris

dreams and reality are but two sides to one coin...
it seems that "longing to understand" never abates.
nice work, amber!

I BELIEVE THAT EACH UNIQUELY SHAPED INDIVIDUAL IS INFUSED WITH A LITTLE BIT OF BOTH WORLDS...DREAMS AND REALITIES. I ALSO BELIEVE THAT ONLY ALMIGHTY GOD CAN FULFILL THE LONGINGS OF THEM BOTH. EXCELLENT WORK, AMBER. YOUR SHARINGS ALWAYS PROVOKE 'THOUGHTS'. THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

These are the best dreams–the ones to long for. I often get them in daydreams rather than the ones I wake up to the middle of the night.

Ron

dreams have their own special appetite ... as long as we feel full from the experience, dreams and reality are basically the same ...

your kindle the fires of my mind and cook your thoughts well in this poem ...

In and Out of consciousness *Amber V*
You have captured an essence of it so
very well!!!!

Lady Vivian

Without dreams...we have nothing and the heart is starved Excellent write, Amber

Amber, you lit on thin line here of dream or reality. Some of the dreams I have are more real than when I'm awake, the touches, etc. And it makes you sense the connectedness of it. Thank you for sharing this, Amber. Always loved your writing mystique... ;P

In Spirit,
Bear

The world would be a very sad place without our dreams...they are often the strong motivators in our lives...they are our Hope for the future...and keep us going when times are tough..
Lovely poem Amber,
Hugs, Diana...

...a fine line, I think dreams and reality can be one of the same...I get so confused myself at times~

This is so rooted and grounded in an authentic depth of feeling, Amber, that it hits (in its gentle way) like a thunderbolt. I love the perfect metre and rhyme you have expressed your sentiments in: so compelling yet lyrical. How well you have kept the tension here between that "confusion" that swirls like a twister in your heart and the objective clarity that is still in touch with a perceived reality, hence being anchored. We all have such a question somewhere and who knows? When dreams and reality are separated by nothing more than a sheer spiritual membrane that could be penetrated at any given instant? Even if time and place are actually adrift, spirits occupy the same moment. One of your very best for certain sure. Love it! :)) xx

Deeply centered emotions knowing that reality of a stardust dream.
Wonderful lyrical poem Amber.
Lady Mary Ann

A very moving poem Amber, written so touching and heartfelt Laura

Amber,
your superbly stated vision speaks of knowing the two are ocassionaly one and the same at least to our mind. I wish you ecstatic confirmation in either realm.
Budd

all the great motivational speakers see it and believe it. You can't obtain a goal unless you can envision it. careful with those daydreams.....I don't want have to go far to pick you up. :)

..if one is the other then we're lucky
and blessed; sadly, they don't often
meet.
Amber, you have vision.

john

Very moving, beautifully written poem,Amber!You have experienced your subject!

ET

"Deeply thinking mind,
dazed and confused,"
I can so relate, well done..

~W~