Fruition (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

" fulfill all my fantasies?"-Woman-how much time do you have???-LOL-well done

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 4, 2012

Beautiful and very emotive work Amber. The metaphors and similes are wonderful.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on May 3, 2012

may your magical power always bring you only the best. great poem, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 1, 2012

THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST GREAT! A CUP OF GOOD JAVA(MINE'S IS STARBUCKS)AND THE RIGHT AMBIANCE CAN TAKE A POET TO MARVELOUS PLACES... IN SEARCH OF LOVE'S FULFILLMENT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on April 30, 2012

Oh my...someone is in trouble once you have to use your ju ju on them...Excellent imagery

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on April 30, 2012

NICE! did you know there is an amazing sunflower farm by rocky neck?....

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 30, 2012

were you visiting Douglas in his dreamscape Viv?
All the beauty & mystification airy & ethereal
Love & Ensoulments Beautiful Embrace
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 30, 2012

An emotionally charged and vivid poem as rejuvenating as being out in beautiful nature!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on April 29, 2012

Airy in delightful verses
along with a bit of magic
that teases one's senses,
well done *Amber V*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 29, 2012

Nice imagery, Amber. I like the comparison with the branches. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on April 28, 2012

Loves magical power. Wonderful poem

Eddy

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 28, 2012

magically delightful

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on April 28, 2012

Another delightful poem Amber. I love the energy you convey here through the windy branches and balmy breezes, combining the movement with a gentle warm atmosphere...I love the magical element too and the communication through the starlight night..Enchanting!...I hope it works!
Love, Diana..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

you bear the fruit of a wonderful poetic journey ...

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

Amber what a lovely poem indeed Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

Whadda call to the wild and answerable only unto himself, so beware your cosmic journey, dear sweet sorcerer of no retreat, Eli's coming, Eli's coming, better hide your heart, Eli' coming, Eli's coming . . .

Hah! Got carried away with that old Three Dog Night song, huh?

Enjoyed your sweet poem.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

Amber,
I hope the call was answered, wonderful verse.
Budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 27, 2012

With a clear mind, a poem can do all that. Yesterday, it was breezy here, too. Strangely, I felt the wind wrap around my body like a piece of laundry flapping in the breeze. I have altered feeling in that area of my chest and back and arms, but it was strange, nonetheless.

Ron