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Retrospection
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Never dwelling in the past, only learning from what was to make what is, much better.


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Retrospection
by Amber "V" Moonstone
7/29/12

Twilight came quickly,
beneath this brilliant purple sky,
the clouds were whispy and dark,
as was my heart.

Alone, I think of you,
wondering where you are,
how you are doing,
and my soul mourns for you.

Dwelling in the past,
makes no sense,
but the past is where we were,
and my heart is empty.

There isn't a moment in each day,
that I don't think of your voice,
your glimmering eyes,
and my soul is floundering.

When did it all go wrong?
was it just a whim,
a faniciful dream of cosmic lovers?
my heart tells me different.

The heart does not lie,
it is a barometer of the soul,
when two souls separate,
the heart becomes the lonely hunter.

How long does the past haunt you?
Does the present become a focus,
and the future elusively challenging,
when two souls were one in this Universe.

There are no answers,
no rules toward our destiny,
only following this lonely hunter,
toward a final heart and soul experience.

 

Retrospective (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Retrospection"
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on August 10, 2012
a very lovely pen, hearttouching and honest reflection of the soul.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 6, 2012
Such powerful authenticity here, Amber, and soul-stirring sentiment. And such a sad place to be - yet you continue to grow, learn and build for your future which undoubtedly awaits. There are so many of us who can relate to your theme; my own daughter is rebuilding her life after one such shocking episode and it is tough when what has been undoubtedly shared by two now lives on only in the heart and mind of the one who remains "unchanged". My words to her are to stay true to herself and she will yet find her personal best of all possible worlds - and her perfect match! Hold tight to love, Amber, and it will yet find you. xx

Reviewed on August 3, 2012
Soulful and thought provoking Amber. Emotive and heart touching.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 2, 2012
This poem feels so genuine, such a heart-reaching intimate conversation...so beautifully expressed!
Blessings, xx
Christine

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 1, 2012
FROM EVERY EXPERIENCE WE DO LEARN SOMETHING...AND WE CAN USE THE PAST AS A GUIDE FOR OUR FUTURE IF WE RECOGNIZE IT AS A POSITIVE TOOL RATHER THAN A NEGATIVE ONE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on July 31, 2012
Never let the dark pervade your soul, let it go and let the light remain. It is our ego which desires to hold onto things and eat at our soul. A term I have always used is this, "like an old comfortable pair of jeans we do not wish to let them go," but there comes a time they are not useful anymore.

It is within our ability to let the past go, but in the present as present situations it is within our ability to say no, go leave me be.


Well written Amber for a soul that is troubled.

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 31, 2012
It may linger on until the day you die, or it may be erased by fonder memories as time goes by. Only time will tell. In the meantime, keep busy because an idle mind is a hell of a workshop.

Ron

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
where does the heart go to sing its song and where does Love follow when the melody is so strong-all of these are answers only time will tell when Love moves through time and the nymphs ring their bell....ok i am not sure what just happened here--ROTFL-but since this is my first post after the first poem i did tonight after -drum roll......Re-Joining the Den i must say Amber your poem moved my poetic muse-excellent poetry as always

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
An excellent write Amber so heartfelt and beautifully wrote this was outstanding poetry Laura

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
So much Love to Give *Amber*V
with such a beautiful longing
that I pray the right one will
come along soon...Lady Vivian

And such talent to convey it!

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
Colour in heart of your poem's essence
of longing. Splendid emotions captured.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
Amber, Your writing of this poem comes from the depth of your soul.
Beautiful!

Deborah

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on July 30, 2012
this bespeaks of deep soulfull memories and love perfectly bravo
budd

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 29, 2012
absolutely a beautiful romantic longing write
your wring brings my inspiration within reach
should I dare reach for it?........
always a pleasure to read your fantastic poetry
love & peace be with you

Reviewed on July 29, 2012
I love your opening sentence, so true for many situations. The pain so deep and real here. May your sunsets land a little softer these day's. heartfelt Amber, w/ luv ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 29, 2012
Damn, Amber, I wish I could use this poem exactly as it is written to write to someone. I won't do that, because it's against the law, but still . . . the poem is just that good in my situation.


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