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Upon a second look
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What is deep inside thee, is the real you


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Upon a second look

Her beauty touched the sensitivity of his eyes.
 
 
Slender she was, her curving figure stemmed into a delicately radiant facial blossom,
only known to be seen in orchids’ petal,
and the wings of butterflies.
 
Passions limbs stretch, they reach desperately reaching, rooted in hearts desire’s chamber, branching into and beyond the clouds of soul’s skies.
 
In time they will bear fruits;
the birthing of trust,
the rearing of compassion,
dedicated faith,
the tender loving of life,
and the yearning of freedom.
 
Her emotions were seen through eye’s windows, perched there on spiraling edges,
unfolding in graduations from one grade to the next.
 
Endless degrees of depth revolving,
evolving in revolution,
traversing twisting circles without conclusions,
only to start again from different perspectives of its living coil.
 
 
Seeing this,
her beauty then touched the sensitivity of his heart.

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Upon a second look"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on December 31, 2012
There is a spiritual experience in observing beauty, although it can also become the realization that it is just one of many games that nature plays. Underneath the orchid's petal, the butterfly's wing, the youthful smile, there is the common essence of all things, living or dead, old or young, pretty or repulsive. Maybe his heart was selective and its sensitivity could only be reached by her own sensitivity carried on the wings of beauty. Maybe.

Axilea

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on August 15, 2012
Deep inside of You *dan* lives
a wondering soul with a tender
heart to back it up...gathered
from this lovely piece of using
time for a "second look" made
worthy....Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 15, 2012
lovely closing in this

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 15, 2012
It is strange how faces affect us. We read so much in an expression or detail on the face of another.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on August 15, 2012
Beautifully worded and crafted...a truly delicate work af art...
Diana..

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 15, 2012
a search of soul as much as a quest for passion
and physicality..you are very much in touch here,
Dan

john

Reviewed on August 14, 2012
Ah! This is touching! So deep a love!

Love ya!

Jane


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