Cheated by Me (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

UNIQUE AND GENUINELY NOTEWORTHY! EXTRAORDINARY PHRASING...I WAS DELIGHTED WITH THE 'UNSUSPECTING' END. ONE OF YOUR BEST CHRISTINE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 23, 2008

Christine,

Different - loved it . . . Bravo on this fine write!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

Cute and well written! I like the ending! Its was a nice surprise!..........M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 30, 2008

I LOVE THIS!! It's quirky and full of surprise. Brilliantly done, Christine, both in terms of concept and execution. Fabulous idea and hope your shadow is now nine feet tall! :)) xx

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

This feels powerful!
and Powerful is Good!
Empowering is in BETTER!
Ride with it Christine! Ride it out....
shall I say Walk with it! I can feel your hearts intensity, in so few important strong lines!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings, Love, LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExoooo

Stay Positive!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

I know wha you meant, and it will remain your faithful one no matter what, following you like a defenseless little puppy dog, but it can walk tall also...only if you do.
Intense poem in is complex simplicity.

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 13, 2008

Beautiful and insightful. Love it! Keep writing girl. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Chrisitne, this is so open and honest. What you've written is so deep, yet in just a few lines. Excellent!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

Poetic magnificence abounds in "Cheated by Me". Its closing lines were written with diamond letters sparkling stars of wisdom.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on October 10, 2007

No lies here ! love & goodness ~Ted

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

Very insightful write.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on September 28, 2007

Good one with a bit of a suprise. Well done

Walt

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 26, 2007

WOW

This is amazingly empowering: getting blamed for another's indiscretions, you just want to stand tall and proud. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on September 22, 2007

Nicely done. I like this one.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Great style Christine! Very interesting write.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

I do believe Christine there's always a someone inside of us wanting to try something different in life but we are afraid of the outcome, so yes we are in control, I really liked this one. Thanks for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 19, 2007

Interresting and would love to know where the inspriarion for this intense style write came from...certainly gives us a reason to re read and ponder all it's images that graphically depict the uncertainties.

Hugs,
Fee

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Exceptional write!
"I just want yo to proudly stand", where we all strive to be in our lives. "But, I'm in control of your every move", is a good thing for most of us. Thanks for this poem.
My very best
Chris

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Very well written Christine. I understand exactly where you're coming from with this. Penned from the heart I see.

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish