Last Dance (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

Beautifully written! I love this, Christine! Well done!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 7, 2009

THE MOON CAN USHER IN MEMORIES...BUT THE LIGHT OF THE SUN BRINGS A BIG 'REALITY CHECK'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on July 10, 2009

"Ending this dance for sure"?
Don't be too certain, Christine. Ever hear of an "afternoon delight"? Comes highly recommended.

Everything you write is fun, interesting and unique. You must thrill a lot of guys!

Richard

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Christine,

In so few words, you have penned volumes - terrific write!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

I feel MAGIC!
and magic is for believers, under the warmth of the moon
and the heat of the sun!
magically written and felt Christine, in these happy memories!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 26, 2008

Most engaging lines, Christine. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

lovely lines

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

Heavenly Christine, blessings as always my friend, love holly

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on May 14, 2008

This poem applies to so many events/situations in life when I read it as a metaphor of things unfinished, interrupted.
The picture and your poem are just lovely.

Axilea

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 12, 2008

Enchanting !.........M

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

What mystical powers Luna has. An aura attracting lovers like no other. "Silhouettes dancing on the moon", paints a picture universal to a romantic's heart. An enchanting piece of work Christine. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

...perhaps the moons music...will be remembered in the warmth of the suns memory...held captive in its movement...and the dance within your words.
beautiful Christine...
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Ah but my sweet friend...if the dance were with you and you being as lovely as this write, it would live forever in your lovers' heart and memory.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Love and passion in the dance by moonlight.
Sensual seductive combo pic and poem, Christine!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

One can always close the eyes and get on dancing, the only thing that matters is to feel each other's body pressed against...

Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Christine, this tells a full story in so few words...this is an excellent write and it gets right to the point. Great!!!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

oooooook ! Deep, deep thoughts here girl. There's a message somewhere in here too; that I am quite sure of. Think I need some time to figure this one out. Well written though as usual. God bless. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Christine,

You are quite the romantic. May your dance never end my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

This poem is precious and the metaphors are ramphant . . . At least to me . . . Very nice . . .

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Christine,
You always say so much in your way. I love this poem and graphic, so lovely.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Beautifully composed... "Last Dance" sings togetherness in the eternity of now.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Sometimes, the sun does come much too soon for a continuance of love, but I always find the first hints of morning to be so renewing and special that as long as I'm near my loved ones, I'm able to keep on dancing, even if in my memory.

Beautiful, Christine.
Thanks,
Jill

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Poigniant and beautifully written, Christine.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Beautiful Christine but I would keep right on dancing if it is in the arms of the right person the dance don't have to end. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

This is short but sweet. It carries a powerful punch. Good job.........hugs

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

That sun often comes calling, much too soon.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

But there's always another to dance to. Lovely thoughts, lovely poem. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Beautifully penned poignancy, Christine - so much said in few words!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.