Many times in writing, I've thought of flames dancing. But until your "Dance of Flame" and your picture, I'd never thought of personifying flame with human qualities.
In the scheme of life, it's a little thing, I suppose, but I'll never see another candle flame flickering without thinking of you and your lovely poem.
I just love being an old dog learning a new trick. It's invigorating!
DONE WITH EXCELLENT IMAGERY, PHRASES AND RHYME THAT TELLS A 'STORY' IN THE SHORT, UNIQUE WAY THAT YOU DO SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Shadows cast by the light of a candle ignite the imagination
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
You take the flame to its natural and reserved place in this well-constructed poem. A woman's flame has been the catalyst for stupendous love and wars begun because it that very same flame. The flame -- the hot, searing flame of woman is what makes men lose all control and do the stupidest and most irrational things, all because of the hot and smoldering flame. Loved this metaphor poem.
Chrissie,
This is truly beautiful all by itself in fact one of your best, but after reading several times it inspired me to write a verse that I wanted to offer between your first and last, hope you don't mind.
hugs
Fee
yearning music never ending
to the warm memory of the flame
delicate as the hand of fate
once burned we never are the same
Christine,
Nicely written, and love that pic. I love the last lines, till another ignites thy wick. Nice visual here.
Smooth as silk!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love those red silky dresses
Love & peace
William
Regis
Tammy
Tis a flame that never dies only flickers to burst into life again
Magical words
Jerry
In the scheme of life, it's a little thing, I suppose, but I'll never see another candle flame flickering without thinking of you and your lovely poem.
I just love being an old dog learning a new trick. It's invigorating!
Richard
"...till another, ignites thy wick."
Love this, Christine. Where does the line form? -gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
Beautifully done, Christine!...ET
Peace, Love & Blessings
Vickie
Georg
Neat and luscious, Christine, thank you. xx
Anna
This is truly beautiful all by itself in fact one of your best, but after reading several times it inspired me to write a verse that I wanted to offer between your first and last, hope you don't mind.
hugs
Fee
yearning music never ending
to the warm memory of the flame
delicate as the hand of fate
once burned we never are the same
Newfie hugs, Rose
Elegance and grace indeed and the feeling of momentary and fleeting beauty is well realized and sensitively expressed.
John
This is great. Since I love dancing, I especially liked it.
With Love,
Cindy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Nicely written, and love that pic. I love the last lines, till another ignites thy wick. Nice visual here.
Smooth as silk!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"