Just Swallow (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on September 9, 2009

Wow! Steamy write....loved it!

Anna

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

Yes indeed Sensuously appetizing
Enjoyed much
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

suggestive sensuality ... smart title ...

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

oh naughty girl...I Love It!!
Those R Some Very Sumptuous SEXYyyyy Lips! ;)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

So sweetly written.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

Excellent Christine, just love it! Love Holly

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Christine, there is creativity dripping from every syllable my friend -- what a novel way to think of love and the passion of desire -- the percussive thumping you hear is my old ticker pounding away in the suggestiveness of your rendering -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Oh My

This torrid verse reaches the parts that other words can only dream about..:)

Jerry

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Oh my goodness... captures that moment wonderfully, Christine: that unstoppable reflex which pushes down to meet the hot flush rising on the neck halfway! No wonder lips plump and part to yield a gasp! Exotic and erotic... Red becomes you! :)) xx

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

A senseous mouth watering ode of love..M

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Uh, I'm blushing here, Oh My!

~W~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

If those lip will kiss this boy will fly!!! :-) LOLOLOLOL

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

pretty steamy!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

What can I say but to echo what others have said - hot, hot, hot!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

GREAT IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Christine,
Reaching for the oxygen tank again, the second time this morning. Don't do this to me! Excellent, Christine, so so erotic.

John

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Way to go, girl!
this puts my Lady In Red to shame

Nicely seductive and full of spice.

Love ya,
Amber V

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Such a sensually enticing write that invites the readers mind and libido to explore the possibilities...very lovely indeed Chrissie a definate publishable piece.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

So erotic and suggestive, Christine. Nicely done. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Enticingly said, Christine. Well done in a torrid way.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Nice one, Christine; I like it! Very much! Yes! Well done; brava! Love the piccy, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Ouch...that is hot!

Cheers,
Dan