Treasure (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 5, 2009

tender are the moments Christine -- and surreal the memories that are launched from the recollections occupied by our loves -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 4, 2009

love that last line... awesome!
Beautiful pen, Christine!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on September 3, 2009

A beautiful write within your words Christine. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

TIMELESS...THOSE BEAUTIFUL LOVE 'GEMS' OF YESTERDAY, TODAY AND TOMORROW...WILL ALWAYS BE TREASURED...
BEAUTIFUL WORK HERE CHRISTINE...DELICATE PHRASES AND IMAGERY...WELL DONE! THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

It's not easy to create such a deep feeling in just eight short lines. You made it work though. Great little poem.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

beautiful poem compliments pic ...

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

beautiful...and truly said...you have words Christine thats soo touching. Loved it. Best and warm wishes. Neerja

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

Absolutely a beautiful write
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

Quite lovely, Christine, as is that graphic.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

Words and picture, a description of peaceful serenity.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

so sweet and lovely!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Christine,
Tender, beautiful and evocative.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

oH Chrissie this is indeed a treasure and one that touches the romantic spirit while tickling the lover's soul. It is a magical write that says so very much but with so few words.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Christine! your poetic words caress the sweet essence of love
this is so very beautiful & the photo is too!
peace & blesings
Vickie

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Dear Christine, I Liked your poem and particularly the last stanza. :
"Reflection of time no matter,
but waves that washed ashore,
hidden treasure discovered,
now buried in hearts...forever more"
Love Emile

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Thank you for sharing this lovely offering, Christine. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Your words bring out the love hidden in that beautiful picture.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Beautiful, Christine, kind of reminds me of circadian rhythms of ocean waves ... well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Looks like he is . . . er . . . Peeing? / Love the swam effect / What is in the heart stays in the heart, no matter how deep we tried to bury it, the love blue bird will always prevail.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

WOW!!! Beautiful, Christine.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Arresting picture and gorgeous poem, Christine; very well penned/illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

The most cherished treasures are always those buried in our hearts.

Lovely poem. Sexy picture. Great way to start my day!

Richard

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Christine, Simply beautiful! I can feel your passion and love throughout each word you wrote. I love the photo! So much love from within my dear sister, I miss our laughter and fun...
Take good care of your heart,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"