SOMETIMES...TO BREATHE...IS ALL YOU CAN DO...AND...AT A GIVEN TIME LIKE THAT, IT'S PROBABLY ALL ONE SHOULD DO. JUST BREATHE...AND WAIT FOR THE MORNING SUN. EXQUISITE! A KEEPER. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Loved this poem, sometimes all we can do is just breathe, somehow a feeling of relief that is all that is required of us. Great write. God bless. Baz

You make a beautiful noise. Love the tone in this work.
Amor

You have a mature, concise style and that's hard to do. This one like my life here in Florida, empty (and the J.B. title take reminds me of his old song)IF i ever get out of Florida, I know I'll succeed; but your poem leaves us with great spiritual advice for the present (wherever we are!) "to embrace this given day,
through blackest of clouds,
…..just breathe" Thanks...

One of the best poems I've read in quite awhile. Loud applause.
thewritingforum.net

Beautiful! :)

Lovely work, well-written, too.

Could not be better!!

*********K U D O S**********
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)X:) Phyllis :)X:)

That's what life is. . . .
One breath after another
Till there are no others.
I really like this. . . .
Reads real smooth.

db

Beautiful, Chrissie. This one brings hope and inspiration. It refreshed my mind, somehow lightened my heart and encouraged my tired spirit to go on and yes, breathe. Love you, girl!

Hugs,
Sheri

Beautiful! Captivating.....so many ways to describe this poetry! Loved this one, Christine!

Anna

Christine, you are running on full with this poem. You carry the concept of faith and intertwine it magnificently with the determination of a pragmatic warrior who will not be defeated by any adversity. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

and breathe we do & must
inhaling the beautiful essence
you have penned Christine

Fragrant Bouquets for You
Vickie

Sometimes we have to remind ourselves to just breathe, compelling pen.

Excelelnt writing sweet lady..stay safe and well.Hugss

Sometimes we run on empty and then in the middle of no where we find our second wind...or begin to breathe again. This is a work of art Chrissie with such depth of feelings and emotions it makes my heart ache.
hugs
fee

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

having just come from Felix's new Breathless, I can see the beautifully twinning of inspiration here, Christine. They are wonderfully complementary poems and are, to me, like a call and response. Deep calling to deep in all ways. Just lovely. xx

Great tone to this piece, developed in such a short time, too. Nicely done.
Sheila

Excellent words, Christine,
finely wrought, deeply felt poetry.

John

Even in this expression of pain, Christine,
your carefully crafted lines speak eloquently. -gene

Its amazing what deep breathing can do to calm and heal and help us feel.

A Beautiful Write Christine
Love & Peace Be with you
William

One day at a time and the rest just seems to fall into place, beautiful sharing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Just take the time to breath, beautifully written Christine.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

nice imagery depicting the emotive part of life in just breathing.

George

One day, one breath at a time. Beautifully written, Christine.

"Just Breathe"

Just Believe...very fine piece

Allen

Beautifully crafted poem. Another well written piece. Thank You for Sharing.


Peace and Love
TONY

I'm breathing, the beautiful words.........Morgan

"...morning light whispers that tell you to breathe..."
What a wonderful companion to the admonition, "Stop and smell the roses."

What I can share is that as our Calendar of Life grows shorter, we are more driven than ever to embrace each day.

Thank you for bringing us "Running on Empty," a thoughtful and provocative offering.

Richard

This is intoxicating and speaks to the soul!
I hope your daughter is doing well...safe travels.
Blessings,
Christine