Chasing Dreams (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 19, 2011

I like how you were able to build that tension in just three lines. Excellent visual:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on March 31, 2011

Nice idea, a dynamic haiku!

Axilea

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

Perfumes of thought
Sand dunes shifting caught
Emotions surrendered and fought.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

I bet she had a smile
upon her face.....
will miss fantastic writes like this one
while you're gone
here I am still trying to return
but there are a few obstacals I need conquer
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

You go, Girl! I'm afraid mine are still being held in that toe-press, eagerly awaiting release! Near or far, we're only two paces behind you in mind and spirit. Return to us safely and with great joy! Have fun! :)) xx

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Well- you couldn't leave on a better note.
Perfect picture- perfect words- perfect dream.

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

This stuns the reader, Christine! Hope all is well, and you enjoy your time away!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Beautiful poetry, Christine.....I do hope everything's okay with you! We'll miss you....hurry back!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

GOD BLESS YOU AND MAY ALL YOUR DREAMS BECOME A REALITY! MISSING YOU ALREADY. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

MAY GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

Dear Christine, Many riddles I can solve. The only one I couldn't, do you want to know which one? "What we will do witout you?" We will miss you. Come back safely. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

YAY!!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

Enjoy your time away sweet lady stay safe and well and always follow your heart...sighhh....Hugsss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

I hope your dreams all come true, Christine, and you will be missed.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

This poem is a winner! Amen

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

see you soon.....you'll be missed. Morgan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Sometimes, yes Christine, we can be our own worst enemies when it comes to fulfilling our dreams. We can put obstacles in the way of our dreams for fear of what would actually happen if we made our dreams come true. Never stop dreaming Chrissie....
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

...you caught your dream! Top hoe lovely lady xx

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Enjoy your time away from us, Christine,
but don't forget to come back, we need your voice
and presence.
Lovely wrought moment, this poem.

John

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

DReam on dearest friend, Dream on...Dreams are the only thing that we all have.

Stay safe and joyful,
Peace love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Oh wow I am going to miss you sweetness. Keep striving your dreams will come true!
Love and Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Lovely sentiments, Christine. Thank you for sharing them. Take care of yourself. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Christine, Love this chasing dreams because if you want it bad enough you will win!! Great positive write that is making me want to run now! Have a great rest my friend. :) Love and hugs!~ Chessly

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

I hope it is a restful time for you. God bless you.

George

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Dreams are what we like, or want life to be like for the most part. Gonna miss you.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Yes, dreams can be more real than life. I hope yours come true always!
Take care of yourself, you will be very missed!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

Stay well, Christine. We'll all miss you.