Christine, I love the "melon skies" that "wept" and the whole first stanza that captures gestures, intent and atmosphere. In this poem, the dramatic tension is effectively built until the last line.
Christine, a swipe of your poetic brush and a canvas of loves emotions are captured. Beautiful expression of the passion love carries and defends my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
I have to unfold this in my head, Christine,
for it rushes in and floods my senses and my thinking;
here, you see exceptionally and communicate with such quality.
"In flesh of night, melon skies bled..."
A powerful opening line and a powerful story. The elements of hope, of a search party, of a search light of a rescue attempt where "tears gone dry"
Great writing.
Awww Sweet Christine, this is indeed heart wrenching and bittersweet for to have experienced this kind of love....the kind where you don't want to live without your hearts desire, is what you have captured so well. Prose and picture blend velvety smooth and though sad it is also a confirmation of love. Well done Chrissie.
hugs and stuff
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"Smiling faces I can see, but not for me,
I sit and watch as tears go by."
I'm so glad your have "gone dry"
db
Axilea
Regis
of which you so elequently write!!
~Christine~
Tesrs shed for this one,
Lady Vivian
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Hugs,
Anna
for it rushes in and floods my senses and my thinking;
here, you see exceptionally and communicate with such quality.
John
A powerful opening line and a powerful story. The elements of hope, of a search party, of a search light of a rescue attempt where "tears gone dry"
Great writing.
Blessings, xx
Christine
George
Newfie Hugs, Rose
hugs and stuff
fee