Muted words, sounded on fingertips,
bottled emotions set free to play,
tiptoeing through perfumed pale pink,
across pistachio warm summer fields,
freshness inhaled of cool mint air,
notes soft, brush against nape of neck,
back arched, fullness of breasts meet sky,
goose bumps dance madly, upon her flesh,
all in a concert...the nature of the beast
Christine, this is romantic and passionate -- creative use of verbiage and meter -- you have brightened my day with this rendering -- I bid you joy love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Words such as "fingertips", "muted", "bottled", tiptoeing", "goose bumps", all evoke something soft and delicately contained. Pink, pistachio, mint: lovely colors that complete this highly atmospheric write.
This is extraordinary, a sensual meteor shower of music and human feelings and expression!
And, yes, what's trapped in the heart can come out through the music ~ if no other way... so often in this life there is no other way.
Play that piano, clarinet, and sing :)
Blessings,
Christine
How completely spellbinding!!!! Your phrasing is pure magic, Christine! I wanted to float away after reading this beautiful poetry!
Perfect way to begin my day!!! Thanks....
You're too much, Christine...
no, you're just right with this beauty.
"...fullness of breasts meet sky"
shouldn't be writing lines like that,
not allowed..it's just too good.
Love this!
Your words, so full of tenderness caress the stars with their intimacy, you express yearning, need, desire and abandonment with such a strong but soft passion that it leaves me almost sad with a want...I can barely describe. A beautiful work of art Chrissie by a beautiful woman.
hugs
fee
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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And, yes, what's trapped in the heart can come out through the music ~ if no other way... so often in this life there is no other way.
Play that piano, clarinet, and sing :)
Blessings,
Christine
Perfect way to begin my day!!! Thanks....
Hugs,
Anna
no, you're just right with this beauty.
"...fullness of breasts meet sky"
shouldn't be writing lines like that,
not allowed..it's just too good.
Love this!
John
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fee
to take another hit. . . .of that fragrance of air.
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