Mud Pies (Children) (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Mud Pies

Today I'm cookin' the dinner.
I�ll use a spoon made of wood
and I know just how to mix it
so EVERYthing I cook tastes good.

I'm smushin' meatloaf but NOT any onions
and veggies without any beans.
See how I squished the smashed 'tatoes
right by the burgers with cheese?

Next I will make ice cream salad.
Cookin' dinner is really fun work.
Here's shovels and buckets of jello
and marshmallow pies for dessert.

Uh oh ... it's startin' to rain.
Now mom will bring me inside ...
The rain sure is wreckin' my cookin'
but it will make MORE mud outside!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

It's raining out there, even as I review this delightful poem, CJ. Time to make a mud pie! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

You have a way of evoking fun memories...the mud pies and the sewer-lid skillet (for me)...lol. Jelly-Jolly Good!!

Micke

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Ah, CJ, that brought back some good old mud-pie making memories! Sure was fun...not so sure Mom enjoyed the muddy looking laundry water, though! Precious write! Thank you... :)

God Bless
Lots of love
Lena

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Brought back some well cooked memories!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Lol!! perfect! Gotta love them mud pies!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

CJ:

You always can write the cutest children's poetry. I enjoy them greatly!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

I can remember my Mom warming the seat of my pants after making mudpies one afternoon. I think I wore most of them! Cute write CJ! Michelle

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

LOL, ahhh fun fun fun...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Hee, hee, yes but I want the beans and
onions with all the other delightful
mud soup.
Nice meeting and reading you..

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Oh those were the days I love mud pies :) I love your gift and style of writing..... A Blessing.

Joselyn

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

OOOHhhwwwwww this was precious..We have all been there..hehehe

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Will that food taste nice? Lovely poem, CJ. Victor

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

LOL...that was adorable. I was digging into the mud, right along with your story. This would make a wonderful children's book. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Kathryn Seifert

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Wonderful, wonderful. I just love it. Well written and paints a picture I remember well.
Thanks
Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Your children's stories are so well done and whimsical! They have to be captivated by them, I am!;-) Thanks!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

CJ

A delightful children's package that also has magnetic appeal to reminiscing adults..

It can be a hard job pleasing all of the people, all of the time, in tastes and opinions...best just to please yourself methinks..

God Bless

Peter