Help! Monsters! (Preschool) (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Excellent, both in writing and format. Loved the way you made them disapp.... ;-)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

I love it!!!! Great effects on that last word! perfect!!

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

A friend wrote poem about a wolf recently...and as a way of "changing the subject", I totally retranslated the gist to humor and commented that I was reminded of the wolf/monster I was convinced lived beneath
my childhood four poster bed. And now your precious MONSTERS have reminded me for real. Mine must have been a good one cause I'm still around..., but gosh , he was real enough to remember still and he wasn't even green! A cutie of a write CJ.
Love and smiles,
Taylor

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Now I'll dream of monsters. That was graphically and poetically well done. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

I love this...you've truly captured the inner child with this one. You've described my granddaughter, she is sure that a monster is lurking everywhere in the house, but when her mommy says it is okay she is ready to settle down and go to sleep just because mommy says so. Your writing is always so creative, I loved the layout...Again great write!
Blessing,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Thank You Cj
For this monster of a write
I'll be reading to my grand kids
thanks for sharing

love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

How CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how you worked your graphics at the end...I'd also love to know how you did it! Sweet write my friend! Michelle (who is freezing to death after coming to her mother's house in Indiana from sunny Florida)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

spooktacular poem CJ! You delight us all!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Oh wow this reminded me so much of my childhood when I'd take a flying leap for my bed, convinced that there were monsters hiding under it. My bladder would be at bursting point before I'd go to the loo because I was terrified they'd grab my feet if I got off the bed. I love these writes. I read the one about 'little sister' last night and meant to reply to it but got distracted. That one gave me a good giggle. You are so good at this.
Chanti

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

LOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Thank heavens for mommies! They are a force for any mean old monster!
Another great piece, CJ. Adorable!

God Bless
Love and hugs
Lena

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Love it!

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

This is real real cool and thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

You always have this kid muse that is so adorable !!!

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

(:D I loved this, CJ. Very well done! Great for the kids!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Clever, clever you, CJ. A delightful write from the heart of a child. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Awwwwwwwwwwww....Andy still a kid..lol....me too but my monsters looks different...wish the could disappear like your Word at the end.....very creative!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

BUT THEY SNEAK BACK IN THROUGH THE CRACKS IN THE CURTAIN, AND THE WARDROBE MEGA MONSTERS..
Sleep well kiddies..

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

CJ, this is adorable and ready for publication with all the highlights and color. I love it. Mo has her own 'monsters can't get me blanket' that I told her chases away the monsters. You're so good with this pre-school poetry. Of course I want a signed copy.
love ya
Rusty

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Another lovely child's poem brought to us by the master at children's poetry...

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