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Dear Santa (Children)
by CJ Heck → (All Poetry by CJ Heck)
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Dear Santa,

You always bring me many things,
my little sister, too,
things we love to play with
and so many things to do.

I see you in big limos
waving at us in parades.
I see you in the shopping malls
and even in arcades.

I see you on the corners
where you're ringing little bells.
I see you talking on TV
advertising big hotels.

It makes me have to wonder
if you're really really there,
or are you just too busy now
with all those things to care?

See, I have a best friend, Tommy,
and I'm sending his address
so this year you won't miss his house,
'cause Tommy, he's the best.

Please, Santa, take some time off
from those other things you do
and this year, visit Tommy's house?
He needs some presents, too.


 
 


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 Reviews of "Dear Santa (Children)"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
I loved the ending !!! many a Tommy out there left in the cold, so nice and proper than a poet should remind us that Santa not always go down through the chimney.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
CJ,

What an endearing presence this one has...you have aptly captured the hearts of children everywhere...what a blessing you are.

Merry Christmas with love,
Rhonda

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
I love this...I have a little boy like Tommy in my class, whom this poem just fits, there is always one or two children who seem to get overlooked during the holidays...I have a special person who enjoys treating those children each year, they leave gifts with no name attached other than...S.C. in our principal's office and the children are asked to come to the office, for the reason they do not know...but the expressions of joy and curiosity as they enter the door melts the heart. Great write, cute and warm...just like a child's thoughts.
Blessings and Happy Holidays,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
It's cute and warm. Cheers for kids.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
The ending was a knockout blow.. Top write CJ..

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
I love it, CJ, and can just picture the illustrations that would go with this adorable write!!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed on November 28, 2006
Dear, sweet poem...that reminds us of the innocense and compassion of a child; how much we can learn from them, our beautiful children. This is so cuddly warm to read!

Micke

Reviewed on November 28, 2006
lovely Christmas poem Cj, hope Santa stops by my house this year

Reviewed on November 28, 2006
Great pen CJ, your view through a childs mind and eyes is perception at its best.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
Precious offering CJ!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
Children can truly teach us many things.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
This is a wonderful holiday poem for Children CJ! I always loved the story of the first Saint Nicholus...He was a Christian and made and bought toys for all the little poor children. Honoring Jesus Christ...as his Lord.

Thank you for sharing this one.

Joselyn

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Perfection. Merry Christmas!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Lovely piece here CJ
depicts chilldren's honest loving care for others
who might not be so fotunate
this my friend is a keeper
for me to read to my loving granddaughters

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
That was very motherly and sweet. Simply lovely. God bless your dear heart. Reminds me of little Tom in Dickens Christmas Carol. Victor

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
CJ ...

You do have a niche in poetry that no one else has even come close too. A splendid write.

Light and Wisdom .,..
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Nice message, CJ. You illustrated the point perfectly here.

Brett

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Hi CJ, read this one with great interest. I couldn't help flashing back to my own childhood days. Christmas was a special occasion at our house. My Mom wrote and produced Christmas plays...usually about the Nativity. They were amazing. People of all walks of life came to see the production. Father Christmas was special too, but not as special as Baby Jesus in the manger. These days, all kids seem to focus on is the big fat guy in the red suit...little is told about Baby Jesus, who is for sure the Reason for the Season. I'm terribly sorry that they have taken Jesus out of schools. Oh, what a dreadful thing to do, don't you agree?
Looking forward to reading more Christmas poems, CJ. :)

God Bless
Love always
Lena

Reviewed by Zahala San Simone
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
A truly sweet work, CJ...As usual, par excellance!

Wendi

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
He never had a problem coming to my house. Though he may have missed a couple cookies now and then.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Aw CJ, so many of your poems bring back memories of Mo. She kept asking for a soccer ball for her birthday. Of course papaw gave her one. After she opened the box, she immediately gave it to her cousin Jakey. Kids really don't have the me mes if you just give them the chance. Once again you have shown us the child we all should be as grown-ups
loveya
Rusty

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
... A wonderful tribute to the spirit of Christmas as encapsulated in the heart of a giving child. I think it a shame that children, sometimes, are dubbed as selfish and "grabbing" when often they beat us adults hands down when it comes to thoughtfulness and sharing. Wonderful "simplicity" and generosity here, CJ. Would all our Christmas attitudes follow suit... TY K xx


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