Some comical relief on a subject that is usually a tough one to answer for children. Love your rhyme scheme and the touching question at the end of your poem.
It cannot get any sweeter, any cuddlier, any yummier, any more heartwarming and soul-purifying than this, dearest CJ! All the {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}, all love in the world, and my very best wishes for the new baby, the baby's talented little sibling... and their proud Nana! :0)
Still glowing from reading this gem,
Alexandra*
Once again CJ, you give us the simple reasoning of a child. There is no other poet on this planet, that I know of, who can tell the story of a child so well. This one is a Hall-of-Famer.
loveya
Rusty
This is so cute!!! A child's perspective of pregnancy. I never understood it and I had no idea why it was in my mom's tummy and how she got it out. It was confusing, but the babies sure were cute and a lot of fun.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
HUH, what about the stork?
Yup you sure do talk to kids not at them, great talent to have..
I love this CJ...I love the way that you speak through the voice of a child...so many times I read your work and it is familiar because much of your writing so closely connects me to my own students and memories of my children when they were young. You are such a wonderful poet so versatile and talented. I think your poetry would make a great reference book for teachers...you touch on so many real life issues that truely concern the lives of children, and addresses many of the questions that they have about life and situations that involve them, like this beautiful write...I just heard one of my students last week announce that his mommy was going to get him a baby brother or sister, and proceeded to tell the other students about his mommy's belly how it would grow, and how they would go to the hospital to get the new baby, but it was a long time before that would happen. You are a wonderful and talented lady my friend, I enjoy your work so much, always brings a smile to my lips.
Blessings oh I almost forgot....Congratulations!!!!
Joyce Bowling
CJ, It's clever how you get inside the heads of children; knowing exactly what they might be thinking and how they might express that thinking. A very clever poet, that's what you are. I so love to read your poems. Thank you my precious, talented friend. :)
God Bless
Love and hugs
Lena
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
What imangination!! Well writ CJ. Loved the ending too. Victor
Donkey-Donk has moved to a new farm, and as much as she tries, she just can't find a job she can do. Includes over 20 adorable photos of Donk trying her best...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Still glowing from reading this gem,
Alexandra*
loveya
Rusty
Guess some kids wonder how they have ever survived it in there!!
love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Yup you sure do talk to kids not at them, great talent to have..
Bless you,
Joselyn
Blessings oh I almost forgot....Congratulations!!!!
Joyce Bowling
Michael
God Bless
Love and hugs
Lena