You had me picturing all those little caterpillar feet with shoes on...I wonder what dreaming will be like tonight?
LOL! Enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Oh I loved this CJ, your words are warm and tender, you are so talented with these write my dear friend, it amazes me how you take something that many overlook and create a beautiful poem with words just as a child would say, you are so talented my friend...a true artist! Enjoyed this so much...happy Valentine's Day!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Skinned their kne? Man o man, is that going to take some bandaids? You have taken the wonderment of a child and mixed it with the foibles of we parents and made a wonderful poem CJ. How old are you? Seven? lol Masterful dear lady.
loveya
Rusty
What a wonderful poem this is! A real delight to read and as I was reading, I wondered if you had in mind that this would be perfect in a childrens book.....
George
Your children poems explore the minds of most children in their quest for knowledge.
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
What a magical world you bring into view,childrens poems are your expertise,loved it,
Michael
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Ah, CJ ... striking again with precious verse! Can you imagine a whole family of caterpillars ... trimming their toenails! Whee! I wish my kids had had your books when they were growing up. Such fun!
CJ, like all your poems that I have read, "Mr. Caterpillar" creeps gently into my head, with pleasing images, and lovely thoughts, through the wonderful words that you have wrought.
CJ, charming as ever...you done again.
One wishes to be a child again and read himself inside of your world of fantasies.
When I was a child, perhaps I didn't ask enough, but today I have you to do the questioning.
Great!!!!
Georg
Alisha is shocked when she learns her seizures can send her back through time. With the meddling of Selene, Goddess of the Moon, and Iris, Messenger Goddess, she finds herself transported to ancient Sparta, where Helen is desperately trying to escape
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LOL! Enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This is a hoot!
Love yer stuff,
Richard
Love Tinka
for my collection
thank you CJ
Peace & Love
William
Happy Valentines Day!
Joselyn
Much love always
Lena
Simply adorable!
Happy Valentine's Day my friend!
Thank you
Love, Sheila
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
But that ending kind of sad.......and spot on truth!
loveya
Rusty
George
Michael
Ted
Nice tale of a childs questions in her monologue..
You expertly capture the wonderment of children and the magic of fairy tales. Beautifully done.
One wishes to be a child again and read himself inside of your world of fantasies.
When I was a child, perhaps I didn't ask enough, but today I have you to do the questioning.
Great!!!!
Georg