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The Climbing Adventure
Climbing-climbing up the rock through the woods, my hands are locked on the rope so prickly-prickly past the pine tree, tickly-tickly.
Climbing-climbing, higher-higher, muscles feel like they’re on fire! Through the dry leaves, rustle-rustle, feel the wind push, hustle-hustle.
A long long way to the tippity top. Hold on tight or flippity flop! One foot here, then one foot there, (wish steps in rocks were everywhere).
Huffing-puffing but not quite there. Look out! There’s a grizzly bear! Shhh-shhh use tippy-toes. He’s turning now. See, there he goes!
Uh oh, snakes beside me, sliding-gliding! Nowhere to go for hiding-hiding! Danger-danger! I can see the snakes are slithering after me,
but no, they’re going in the ground through those holes going down-down Oh no, growling-growling from behind! If I turn, what will I find?
A grumpy-grumpy scary thing? I wish I brought a bell to ring! It’s getting dark and hard to see the something else that’s chasing me!
Oh my gosh … I’m at the top. I guess for now, I‘ll have to stop. That was fun, I love pretending … but I wish the stairs were never ending!
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Reindeer
I had you in the Sierra Madres out there,
in the wide opened spaces, well at least you took me there
outstanding write, you never disappoint your readers.
Love & peace
William
Thanks for sharing....brought back many memories!!
Love Tinka
"Oh my gosh … I’m at the top.
I guess for now, I‘ll have to stop.
That was fun, I love pretending …
but I wish the stairs were never ending!"
Thank you!!!
Blessings,
Josie
Great as always.
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
loveya
Rusty
Love,
Eileen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Hugs, Laura
Michael
Of climbing and Huffing puffing WOW
There’s a grizzly bear!
I don't know how I would react to a grizzly bear!
probably have a heart attack!!
This is an outstanding children's write
I thought it was very very Interesting to read
So I read it the 2th time
And the imagery was so vivid and the flow
Was excellent ,I love it!!
Love and Peace to You Always...Morning Star
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *gaspgaspgasp--think me lung just popped*
I can see this in a book spread out throughout all the preschools and Kindergarten classes, with every, prickly-prickly, tickly-tickly, higher-higher, rustle-rustle, hustle-hustle, tippity top, and flippity flop, every Shhh-shhh use tippy-toes, sliding-gliding, hiding-hiding, Danger-danger,down-down, growling-growling, grumpy-grumpy part, all the children are acting out the words together!
I will try it on the babies! :)
Love this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Hmm, flight of stairs? I find stairs get steeper as I get older - and it is the same stairs too!
This poem would surely put a grin on a child's face - did mine.
Dai