Remember the days
when we were both young
we'd walk for hours
and talk
about nothing?
When you'd call me up
at for o clock in the afternoon
and we'd put on our bathing suits
in the sweet summer sun
and talk about boys
love,
and our dreams for the future
on your front porch
sipping lemonade.
When bad days didnt exist,
because everything was simple,
for two best friends,
in the summer.
when worries were forgotten,
dried up by the sunshine
forever lost
to a colder season
that didnt even exist
in our warm world
of summer
picnics,
trampolines,
friendships,
bikinis,
sleepovers,
boyfriends,
and love.
but the air has gotten colder,
snow is falling,
covering our summer hopes and dreams
blacking them out,
winter is here.
Have we really growen up that fast?
where are those two girls
i used to know?
wont you come out to walk in the sun
again
with me?
for we are still so young....
wont you come play in the snow?
Lovely--and with every cycle of seasons there is a passing year. May you have many, many years to enjoy with those special friends--even the storms for they will help you weather them.
Excellent write.
Enjoyed.
--RaeLynn
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Brings back some great memories when I was young thank you for sharing your work here at the Den...Hugs and Love, Peggy
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Beautifully written work. I flowed right along with these words. You have a gift for word and pen.......
If we could only re-capture those wonderful times once again.
Best regards,
Chris
Yes Natasha, fill your evey dream, enjoy life while you are young for tomorrow comes too fast. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us.
Newfie Hugs cling to you, Rose
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Larry
Excellent write.
Enjoyed.
--RaeLynn
If we could only re-capture those wonderful times once again.
Best regards,
Chris
Newfie Hugs cling to you, Rose