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seeing a cloud floating by
I willed it landed

where I could and did
step upon its fluffy existence
and then floated with it
on an aerial flight
looking out at the landscape
surreal at these heights
 
the cloud seemed to turn
in response to my thought
to enhance my view of a forest,
mountain or lake equally hovering
or soaring it mattered not to the
cloud its only command were my
thoughts neither spoken nor loud


I waited for ideals to generate
momentum, generous contemplations
to plant within me
yet no sound, nor vision
filled my volume
disappointment I did not allow
as the ride on the cloud was
absolute and hallowed 
 
now moving my thoughts into the stillness
floating in the mist of this perfect billowing
substance and ask
why do you serve in this way?
and what is the direction?
 
 

 

 *graphic art - Gordon Rosenberg

**music clip- - "magic travels"

 

 
 


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 Reviews of "enhanced view"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Music, image and verses complement one another most effectively to uplift one's spirit. Thank you for sharing this gift, Debby. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
So very spiritually enlightening....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
nature reflects the mood of our spirit as our spirit moves through the moods of its nature ...

inspiring sojourn, Debby ...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
I wonderful journey and imagery!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
An outstanding mystical write as well as journey...well done, enjoyed this...this thought would make a great writing prompt for my students. Where would you go if you could ride a cloud? May I borrow this idea? I would love to read them your poem....great job!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
wonderful surreal feel of a mystical journey between imagery and reality. Lovely.

Fee

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Debby, this is has been an extraordinary ride, and the graphics are quite colorful.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
What a captivating piece and graphic, Debby, and I think it would be asolutely marvelous to float on a cloud!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Deb, and the sky made a pillow with a cloud so you could, when asleep, dream this poem.
Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Ahhhhh That's my kind of travel;-) You soar with this beauty Debby!
I like the way you honored the cloud! Excellent graphic! Sorry I couldn't get the music...

ET


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