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self-question the consciousness within
and find the consciousness is not inside you
you are inside the consciousness
 
uni-verse instantly becomes the multi-verse
inside is outside flipped upside down
something attempts to be known
instantly immersed from all directions
is the overwhelming external conscious
 
human perspective thinking the
thoughts of angels
 
finding ecstatic bliss, if even for an instant
rallys the heart to continue its work
as the time of the changing of the ages
is well enmeshed upon us
and quickly gaining momentum

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 Reviews of "alert"
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on February 10, 2009
Well that first stanza belongs in everybody's book for sure. Somehow this is a world where everything is turned inside out and we have to rightly reverse it for ourselves. And your idea of "angels" is leaps & bounds ahead of most - from your book no doubt...
Later, michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 3, 2009
Very succinct and articulate encapsulation of very complex thoughts and thinking, Debby. Inspiring to say the least! Yes, all of our needs and wants and the who-we-are are answered from the without within and the within without. It's the ability to harness it, perhaps, that is crucial. Makes me think of harnessing the wind, somehow. xx

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on February 1, 2009
This is truly a wonderful piece~`*

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 31, 2009
To look into innerself is sometimes hard to do. We get so caught up in the surface things , Its difficult to see beyond them. There is a higher level of consciousness which many seek to obtain ....Good poem....M

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
it is true, even a second on pure enlightenment has a life-long effect ... excellent work, Debby ... really like the voicing and direction you took this poem through ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
so well worded--love the perspective and wisdom!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
I find this a most apt, timely, and meaningful write, Debby. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
One would hope this were the case but reality is unfortunatly ego based

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
This is absolutely beautiful 'you are inside the consciousness' making for Oneness in the UNIverse. So many ways to see love. Thank you for sharing this one. Warmth and Love to you. Carin'


Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Your creative way of saying things is well done in this piece. You've touched what we sometimes feel within... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Debby, this is a profound piece of writing. Nice work.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Do you really have such sparks in your eyes?

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Very deep and sensitive, touching at feelings and emotions that we all have even if we don't always acknowlege them. Nicely done Debby.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Purely perfect thoughts. I love every word and have written very similar verses. I particularly like "you are inside the consciousness" and "finding ecstatic bliss, if even for an instant." I have experienced this bliss and it is not constant as the human lids of suppression tend to drive it down eventually, but when experienced it inspires and motivates one to move forward in faith - to progress toward potentiality fulfilled "gaining momentum" like a flywheel.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Interestingly written thoughts Debby, as the world spins so the knowledge is exposed, there is a flow of the universe that brings us into the depth of thought where we find all that we wish to know..

nice work..

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
An alert heart will always fend the perils, and would "...continue its work at the time of changing ages..." Superb!

Georg


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
I have always known that, somewhere, there was a girl with those blinking eyes. Still searching. I love this line "inside is outside flipped upside down" -- which is very very close to my own idea of God/universe/me (oops, got serious, there). Well done, Debby :-)

Ted

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
You give such enlighten ment Debby! Your oversoul is
powerful!

Thanks for your comment, I agree with you and I love the clarity
in your answer! As you know most arguements are from people who can't understand how those who are good all their lives,and someone like Sal, confesses in the last minute and goes to heaven;-)

Eileen


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