Chasms of Desire (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on November 8, 2013

THis is a treasure

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on November 5, 2013

For some reason I didn't see this when you posted.I it's so pretty.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 30, 2013

beautifully composed
a lovely romantic write
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Robert Whitford

Reviewed on October 26, 2013

Love and passion can be expressed in so many ways. Definitely not raw here like a rare steak, but refined and flowered like the garden it could be. Quiet and sensual. I enjoyed the gorgeous language Victoria. Bob

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2013

if a poem could be said to be sentient, then this one would... suffused with sensuality and a naturalism writ large, raw with the rush of rustling skirts, sussurations, and an osmosis of organic delight... expressed with the rarest of mingled images... all that is missing is the tulips entwined... but "her orchid's privacy" more than makes up for those purses... bravo, Victoria.

Roger

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 19, 2013

Such finesse you bring, Vickie,
writing of fruitful desires...

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by J. Roseline

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

Your verses give me the impression of a sensuous woman adorned with precious jewels in a necklace with a glittering emerald shining above her bosoms celebrating her sensuous beauty.
lovely lines..rose

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

Passionately romantic is she.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

You're a riddling fox I swear! Oh safety pin oh safety pin my chastity perhaps you know where the key fits..."Where their treasure troves meld as an eclipse of love" puts the squeeze on alchemical metaphor does it not? I mean, the GC swells the whole of its ego in All-That-Is giving rise to...oh why don't I just say it! Giving rise to where the kiss evolves where I leave off and she begins...spread the noise lip to lip palm to palm...fill the carafe with sweet reward...this poetry is copper's way of turning chemistry's arousal at the touch of a fingertip coaxing mineral properties unnamed...

Yours xoxo

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

This is purely dreamy, hon!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

When you find a gem you display it for all the world to see. This is such a gem.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

Beautiful indeed, Vickie.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

Beautifully worded, Vickie. You brought forth so many priceless thoughts, i.e., "Undestroyed by the harshness of deep wounds," and "Surrendering passion to the whet chasms of desire," to name just two. In my opinion, this happens to be one of your very best. And THAT is saying a lot.