There is a lot of feeling and definitely "psychology" in this poem. Moving forward is an internal force of life and anything that holds one back is an obstacle. Well said, Dawn.
Like a bolt between the eyes, Dawn. You nailed it. So many limp along in life, believing that it is the "right" thing to persevere when actually there is NO resolution, because the chemistry is all-wrong somehow. It's a bizarre thing when trying to do the best for the other (by honouring promises and entrenched commitments) becomes basically a slow-death of both, when the kindest and most fulfilling, honest thing would be to cut loose and set free. You paint such unyielding "failure" in stark colours here. May it lead many to "success". xx
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Very well said sweet lady..enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss
Well said. The wise soon discover that saying good-bye is the first step toward another second chance. Life is full of second chances if we just walk in faith. Well done my friend. J'nia
Dawn, this work gives us that view on moving forward through all life and relationships, it is at times frustrating and can keep one within a hold that only weighs down the soul...your expression of whispering a prayer to say goodbye to the past is where one can see that strength...
Dawn,
The style stands out here, its directness, focus and expression in a poem of wisdom, emotional maturity and insight; right from beginning to end.
John
Dawn you nailed this one perfectly. We all I think reach a point in life and love where is enought is enough, enough excuese, enough fights, enough secrets and enough tears. Great write here for sure.
Your words are beautifully said, and are for each of us when we reach the end of a road. They are said as if a ring of having lived them. - Excellent decision making. - Bill
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Regis
Anna
Your characters are so deeply intense. It's as if they come straight from a developed novel. Great message here. Hugs,
Sheila
Georg
I enjoy your wonderful poetic thoughts
Love & peace be with you
William
nice work...
art Sun...
Indeed, it is.
Christine
In Spirit,
Bear
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
The style stands out here, its directness, focus and expression in a poem of wisdom, emotional maturity and insight; right from beginning to end.
John
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that gives us an example of going "One Step Ahead"
Love,
Eileen
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Thus Dawn in this poem...the Prayers that are whispered gather amongst angels and on wings of hope touch the Heart of God..
Excellent writing...Allen
Hugs,
Marcia
Cryssa
This poem is written so well. Its expression and the technique in storytelling is marvelous!!!!
Life, she realized, is one and short –
too short to spend being unhappy.
What is...is.
-gene.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.