Like the seasons, all things change -- sometimes not for the better, but such is life and we must take the good change along with the bad, unfortunately. Beautifully written, Dawn...very visual! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
I love the imagery of the first stanza... I love autumn, but dread the winters chill. With all going on in my life right now I am hoping that the winter that is currently threatening will quickly pass into the fresh green of new growth of early spring.
Sigh...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
the passionate mood and seasonal direction of this poem is marvelous ... very well written ..
SHADOWS THAT UNSETTLE BUT AT THE SAME TIME BRING HOPE FOR WHAT IS TO COME AGAIN. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS FANTASTIC. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
a tender insight.
it seemed to be of your own life,
and the imagery and simile in the first strophe
is sumptuous. I love poetic prose. and your
new bio-picture is lovely Dawn.
Blessings ...
Dawn, love the imagery, especially in the first stanza which
captures my favorite season. One think we can always count on
is change and the speed of change, which you deal with beautifully
in the closing stanza. -gene.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
It's as though you've expressed all the conflicting feelings that this beautiful time of year brings to my heart. I love late summer and I love fall; I just wish they'd last longer. I feel like I could release my tentative way and embrace, with abandon, all the gifts of this time of year if I could only accept (or for a time forget about) the next season waiting behind the curtain. Sometimes, I feel I'm unfair to winter as it has many attributes, many beauties all its own. I do so love long winter walks after a fresh and deep snowfall. Winter is a time of withdrawal and introspection - a time of preparation to emerge anew when the time is right. Sigh.
"Autumn's Shadows" truly describes the mood of autumn and winter. I have similar feelings myself; however, as I age I am so thankful for life that I try to pull from even the worst days the glory and joy that can be found in all nature. I suppose it is a mindset of sorts how we greet each season. I love your poem.
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Taking the weather and making a moral from its changing times is pure and classic Dawn. Nicely done, you always put just a bit "more" into your poetry.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Oh my..Lovely writing sweet lady..well done indeed...stay safe and well..Hugss
Ilike the dreamy, contemplative...almost wistful feel of this one, it created an image in my mind at least of a beautiful middle aged woman standing at a window...looking out at the fall leafs, a wisp of hair across her forehead and maybe drying her hands on an apron...lovey indeed
fee
Lugubrious morning, perhaps up from the dungeons shadows of a sorrowful Autumn, gray, misty, just before the explosion of a rainbow that will scatter millions of little colorful pieces on the world's landscape...
Dawn,
Fine philosophical reflection and rightful bow to the inevitabilities of change, death and re-birth. I like the quiet air of this poem, its wise and tender music.
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Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Sheila
Sigh...
Cryssa
Allen
You took me there
Jerry
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
it seemed to be of your own life,
and the imagery and simile in the first strophe
is sumptuous. I love poetic prose. and your
new bio-picture is lovely Dawn.
Blessings ...
captures my favorite season. One think we can always count on
is change and the speed of change, which you deal with beautifully
in the closing stanza. -gene.
Ron
Still, she was wise enough to know there were
those things she was unable to control…
things like people, emotions not her own,
and seasons.
- David
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Christine
Much wisdom in your words.
EDWIN
fee
Georg
Fine philosophical reflection and rightful bow to the inevitabilities of change, death and re-birth. I like the quiet air of this poem, its wise and tender music.
John