I agree with the Amazing poet who stated it really causes one to think,....who is he?" , but I think I have an idea and I don't like his ways. his intro seems inticing but then the rest feel slimy and your poem is an excellent illustration of that,
Holy Blessings
peace',
Richard C Suarez
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Seduction and mystery ooze through this piece. I was intrigued by the line "sucking up raw lust." Your work is very direct and intense, engaging the reader from title to end. Well done.
man...your writes are always so close to bubbling over with this internal heat and passion that simply must just well up from the center of you into your pen, keyboard and out, into the world, to find it' resonation in the hearts and minds of those of us who red you, robin. your use of language and intensity is admirable and perfect for our shard discipline. thank you for sharing this gem!
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
Holy Blessings
peace',
Richard C Suarez
Your old friend, Janet xoxoxo
Where are you Robin?
I miss you a lot!
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Cliff
A composition that strikes imagination and makes the reader think...
"Who is He?" flows and dances the rhythm of life's realities and
mysteries.
Keep posting, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Temptress (Damned RightOn)Is sad But Eye Opener Even Your Own Blood-Children Tempt (Screw) You!
TRASK
Regis
Enjoyable sensuous write
Peace & Love
William
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Sage
Exciting!
Susan