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Little Man in the Mountains
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This is for Dalton for he was my inspiraton.


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Little Man in the Mountains
 
We took our little man with us to the mountains for awhile.
We weren’t even there 5 minutes before he made us smile.
As soon as we got there on our primitive land,
He said, “Where’s the cable?” that’s how it began.
 
He’s so little, he’s only six, and a month seems so long.
Were the thoughts I was thinking, hoping I was wrong.
What a joy he was each day when he awoke from sleep.
Being so excited about the deer, antelope and sheep.
 
He was so thrilled about riding the 4wheelers around.
He never complained, whined or made derogatory sounds.
The horses would come by every day to visit for awhile,
Watching Little Man’s exhilaration always made us smile.
 
It was unusual but Little Man ate everything on his plate.
When he went out fishing he put on his own bait.
He out fished the big guys like he was a pro.
When he was told, “its bedtime,” he never said no.
 
At the end of the month and it was time for him to go.
I knew I would miss him, he was my sunshine, you know.
When the truck pulled away he looked back and gave me a smile.
All the tears in my eyes came down and they lasted awhile.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May

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 Reviews of "Little Man in the Mountains"
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Sweet write and a beautiful little guy! Very nice write, Bonnie; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
This is such an adorable poem with an adorable kid.I like reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 29, 2008
The kids cute and of course so is the poem, but what I want to know is, is that neat lookin' bike thing he is riding for sale, that is way cool...;-) I want one..., ED


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