You Need Both… (poem) by Bonnie Lou May on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Bonnie "You Need Both" is heart touching.
Wonderful "For a father keeps you straight so you never slip and fall.
And a daddy’s there to pick you up and help you stand tall." simply beautiful.

Blessings,
Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

On the other hand... I think I am a Mom, or Mommy, and a mother...My kids don't really appreciate the Mother in me. Last week, one of my kids was even kind enough to tell me I was mean. Sigh...Let's just hope he meant the Mother in me, and not the mom...
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

This is a wonderful poem.Your words come straight from the depths of your soul.Take care

Love and Hugs
Edwin

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

What a BEAUTIFUL Poem Bonnie, I so LOVED every word! you have chosen and I could feel the LOVEEE!
I wish I had "either" of them!
Balance and Limits are important as well...
He looks stern and smart, but stern means STrength and determination and courage and YOU have all that Bonnie! and more!
WRITE ON!
Touching hearts Strong!
God Bless YOU!
Warmest of Blessing, LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

It's great that you have a good relationship with you daddy who has the father in him to steer you from wrong to right.

Handsome daddy he was...in that picture!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

It took me years to separate these two different men.
But once I did, I understood, and loved them both again.

Amazing how that works!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

A lovely tribute to your parents, I am proud to be your "brother"

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

Very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Boy You Never Wanna Meet My Bastard Daddy!He Just Punched You In Face Says Thats For Next Time You Get In Trouble,i.e. He Thought I Wasn't His Kid----My Momma Did Had Affair(?)I Wished She Did...

Illuminating Write....

TRASK

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Sounds tremendously wonderful...but I never had one.
I am happy yours was kind and loving!
You were blessed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

POWERFULLY penned lessons in these lines, Bonnie, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

I envy you this write; but am very happy for you! It's a beautiful way of describing the way a loving parent must be .... well done, as is your way~ hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Bonnie~!

The warmth and compassion that you write with is phenomenal - blessings to you for this lovely penning, and all your incomparable work!!

LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Bonnie this is an excellent write as always, and an important reminder, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Bonnie, this shows show much wisdom and relfection on both daddy and father, and how each are inportant. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

This is a poignantly written piece
Bonnie May, that shows the child in you still loves your Daddy and your Father. Those were titles earned, not given. If you hadthem in your life, then you were truly blessed.

hugs,

Starman

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

This one is so very true to be aparent of either gender we really must wear two faces but hopefully they balance to offer the best help in a child's growth

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

I love this write. So true about needing two fathers. Apathy doesn't cut it. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

I must have been a holy terror when I was quite young, my mom spoiled me rotten, and dad, well he had to be the bad guy, as i guess somebody had too...he and I had a rough life though for the last several years of his life things did change for the better...I still miss him every now and then, I just wish he could have met Rufuz, as its been, and I can't believe it, 20 years since his passing...life goes on & sometimes, but only SOMETIMES, I see my dad in something I do...OMG, I'M TURNING INTO MY FATHER!!! LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

I love this Bonnie. My dad wasn't around much while I was growing up so my Mom carried the entire load. Your poem reminds me of the difference between Mommie, Mama, and Mother. Mother was a mighty force to be reckoned with and she always won and was always right. Bless her soul.
Hugs,
Marcia