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Deep in Egypt, Handing up Now
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Couple good things happened: Thunder-Rain's In the Eye anthology is a fait accompli. Simply beautiful! Also, I received word that I made it to semi-finalist status re this last New Millennium competition. ~ Thanks for everything, 'Pea' xOx


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            Deep in Egypt, Handing up Now

 

. . .keep drifting to the hundreds of hands

that imprinted stars on the inner walls of a tomb

they had stone-by-stoned (some hopefully stoned

to ease the gouges left by whips by self-hypnosis

or purloined wine).  Were they forced to press

their palms and fingers, or were they saying, Hark!

We lived! [??]  Felt the sweet breeze on a baking day,

felt the sun warm our foreheads and arms and backs

on a stone cold, dead cold, morning.  Felt love warm

our loins and wrap our beaten limbs in silk

on cold, stark, way short nights.  Felt

the eyes of our sisters and brothers  lave

our wounds and force rods into our spines

and try to sweeten the bitterness out of gruel

writhing with worms and bugs.  I want to feel

that every man, woman, and child knew

joy, however fleeting.   That the relief

of getting off bleeding, blistered feet

when finally it came was heaven.  That the end

of a shift spent hauling, hoisting and being growled

and shouted at, and worse, tasted like wild honey.  

That being out in all kinds of weather made a song

out of a cloudless blue sky.  That a bird on the wing

or peacefully nesting gave more pleasure

than jealousy.  That the gleam of a ruby

or smooth richness of turquoise or seduction of

onyx or green jade rippled the senses without throwing

a caul over heart and mind.  That the glide of soft cotton,

if ever it came,  brought a delicious shiver, and a sip

from a shared cup.  That having a child soothed

more than forebode separation by maiming, death or sale.  

Being human, I like to feel they milked happiness

out of moments so brief and infrequent that the fortunate

would have failed to count.  Their hands

were beautifully made, it is clear.   Shaped

for a purpose such as telling us they. . .

that we must. . . l i v e.

 

 

(C) Phyllis Jean Green,  January, 2007

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 Reviews of "Deep in Egypt, Handing up Now"
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Passion flows in the blood and stirs the heart with power and inspiration; you make history come A L I V E and make us grateful for having shared the experience. Thank you, (((Pea))), and congratulations!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Exceptional work of art Pea that touches the very fibre of the heart and soul that we who read and love your work posess.

Fee

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 15, 2007
Written with a masterful pen Pea, invoking deep thoughts and imagery

Carole

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
It spoke to me in a level so deep, it just about rendered me speechless. I imagined having a moment as brief as a falling star, and yet, be able to feel and recognize, and LIVE the experience. If that's all we have, then that's all we have, but if we don't live it, we miss it for ever. You took a page in history and placed it in our hearts. Congratulations, Pea!!! and thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

Carmen

Carmen

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
There are many levels on which to appreciate DEEP IN EGYPT, HANDING UP NOW, but my greatest appreciation comes from how it extends the legacy it extols. Thanks for that.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Outstanding prose very beautiful view of the history of Egypt a
Powerful closing statement!!
Congratulations on your achieved.
Love And Peace t You Always...Morning Star

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Your excewllent pen deserves the status you have achieved. Victor

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
I love the end...well done and congrats to you!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Wow this is excellent prose.....thanks for sharing your master quill!!

Congratz on your achievements

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Enjoyed this interesting and incredible prose. Indeed we must be thankful for the air we breathe and not take it for granted. And always hold dear positive images and thoughts about those before us. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed on January 14, 2007

A poetic banquet on the table of history. "Deep in Egypt, Handing up Now" is art and knowledge meeting to deliver a masterpiece.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Powerful and subtly disturbing, you go beyond the surface amaze of the pyramids and on to address the human factors involved, Pea. In my mind I never thought about those tasks being performed out of anything other than divine dedication, but truth be known, they were created by slaves...slaves who had no choice and no other way to survive. Joy is where we find it and hopefully those moments when the sunset was spectacular or the skies cleared after a tumultuous storm, they found pleasure in the unmatched awe of God's paintbrush, and in death they found a sweet peace that they would never have known without the tortures of their lifetime. Surely, each of them has left their mark upon the earth, and all who have followed stand in mysterious awe of their handiwork. Wonderful write!!
Take care,
Sherry


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