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Diamonds in the Rust
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I've been watching too many flippin' car restoration shows...

1935 Ford rat rod my brother and I liberated
for $100. Replaced the ugly Packard grille
with a 32 grille shell. Cadillac V8 power got
her down the road until I rolled her at 80 mph.


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Diamonds in the Rust

To drive down automobile row,
where grease monkeys thrive,
and life goes by both fast and slow.

Or visit junkyard relics of the past,
recalling memories of romancing,
adventuring and going way too fast.

Finding a dust covered jewel in a barn,
a target of pigeons looking forlorn,
while listening to another old yarn.

One that's been trapped in a garage,
good intentions but neglected instead,
hopes of restoration only a mirage.

Out in the fields or deep in the wood,
dragged there long ago and left for good,
rusting and wishing if only they could.

In a stable of some hoarder's desire,
abandoned like a puppy in an old bin,
only to raise some neighbor's ire.

To be rediscovered and dragged on out,
a discoverer's delight, a scream and shout.

Off to the shop to be torn down and cleaned,
every part savored, refinished and preened.

Dents pounded out and surfaces smoothed,
the finest of finishes new or improved.

Engines overhauled to run like new,
running gear improved or restored to queue.

Electrics all working better than spec,
nothing escapes a thorough safety check.

Interiors restored to their former glory,
new finishes and bright colors tell the story.

Crank her up for a quick ride,
wave at the neighbors with pride.

There is something beautiful,
about restoring the past.
It's a part of our history,
we should make it last.

There is no downside,
to projects like these.
If they don't make money,
they put the mind at ease.

A little bit of history,
one can drive and enjoy.
A once neglected throwaway,
it is now a new toy.

Copyright 2014 © Ronald W. Hull

2/27/14

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 Reviews of "Diamonds in the Rust"
Reviewed by John Dyhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2014
I like the two changes of pace (due to the structure of the stanzas)it starts ot slow (3 lines) the pace hots up as the project proceeds (couplets) and then a certain grace for the finished product in the longer verse.
An excellent description of "diamonds in rust"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 7, 2014
Thank you for sharing the experience, Ron. I like the simile that you used, "diamonds in the rough." Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on March 6, 2014
Ron, this has to be my favorite poem by you thus far. You must have been reveling in memory with the typing of each line! M.True

Reviewed by Joel Sattler
Reviewed on March 6, 2014
Sweet.

Reviewed by Larry Matthews
Reviewed on March 5, 2014
My fantasy fulfilled Ron. Thanks for reminding me of the dreams of my youth. I send this to heaven for my brothers Rog and Ron in memory of the many hours we spent united in a labour of love working on the ride of our dreams. Excellent !!! Made me feel like old times.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2014
What a joyful, romping poem* I like the idea of hopes being a mirage. It is filled with energy movement, happening, respect. The whole thing works and the title is delightful. Good one, Ron!! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 3, 2014
I really like this poem - in fact, your words reminded me of what I do, and you've inspired me to write my posted poem this morning - 'Diamonds In The Ruff' Thanks!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 2, 2014
well done !

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 2, 2014
~Ron~
A wonderful write. John is restoring a 1949 B Allis-Chalmers tractor.
One like his dad owned. Broken, rusted, it is now primed for
the new orange paint. Love in projects abounds!!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on March 2, 2014
This speaks volumes, Ron. I long for a certain 1920's Rolls Royce Phantom, located not far from me. She sits in a filthy old barn, with the mice eating her seats and moths shredding her drapes, her solid brass lanterns near black with tarnish ...but he will not part with her, oh no! Happy to let her rot - But she is SO BEAUTIFUL!

Rx

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
This seems like a man finding his first love after 50 years and going ga ga after her trying to relive the past!!JK

Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
Really nice poem. The thought is so good and the variation in the stanza-form brilliant. The imagery is superb. You are a great poet Ron, if I know what poetry is.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
in The Bronx there's a yearly car show that has tons of vintage cars, motorcycles, etc. a great event .... Orange County Choppers has a outstanding presentation also ... luv old cars ...

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
Very good Ron gives such comfort. Peace!!!

Reviewed by jeanne watson
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
I enjoyed the light-hearted romp through old bumpers, fenders and backseats.

We have a 1972 Dodge Charger in our driveway, my son's project.

... a fun and entertaining write. Cool!

jeanne

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
If only we could be restored like that.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
many love this hobby or enterprise
budd

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
I once did a photo shoot in Vermont where the premise was "Barn Treasures" and you wouldn't believe the number of old cars sitting in barns. Loved this chunk of rusted nostalgia.

Reviewed on March 1, 2014
I take my grandson to car shows in the area. Yes, one can see the pride the owners take in their "diamonds".

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
I hear you loud and clear on the restoration of something from the past, Ron. Make it shiny and bright with real whitewalls . . . Too bad we can't do that with humans. Maybe in the future we can.

Reviewed on March 1, 2014
Nothing is better than a product of workman's delight. A wonderful read, Ron!!

Sandie

Reviewed by June Marshall
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
well don Ron


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