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De-iced, now What?
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   De-iced, now What?

 It was as if she were a comet,
then he,
then she,
on and on, orbiting
faster and faster,
first gathering ice, then burning
it away by veering close
to the sun.
First he,
then she,
then up for grabs.
Neither chose to be
a comet.  Certainly
not a pair.
What, and  be content
to find pieces of oneself
flying into ether
while others loosen
from their moorings?
Admit the stratosphere
made him tingle,
and her.
Hot what she wanted,
and he.
To fly at supersonic,
nay,  supernatural,
speed.
If not melt and join,
come dangerously
close to touching
the untouched
in her,
in him.
Skin sloughs, tough.
Flew, didn't we.
People gasped
as they looked up.
Now what little's left
has hardened
or shattered, perhaps
beyond repair.
Ah, well, sighs
she, sighs he,
got to feel
the high.
 
 
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2008
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 Reviews of "De-iced, now What?"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
lol. What a wild imagination. Two comets joining in bliss? I'll be watching the night sky a bit more now! Thank you for the laugh. Liz
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2008
Vividly compelling, Pea. I love the way you let your imagination dictate your verses. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
they float off into oblivion in hopes to re-gather, then what?
LOL!
So enjoyed this one Pea~
Your mind wanders...and I love it! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
I really enjoyed the short lines, almost hesitant, then impassioned, combining comets and hearts, lovely.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
Reads like a whirling dervish...what a ride!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2008
Great writing,enjoyed very much,take care...Hugsssssssss
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I love how your solar system lives. Lady J
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Quite an interesting and powerful piece, Phyllis.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Excellent write, Pea; very well penned!

Stay safe; storms on way; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
This is funny. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Ditto Bonnie!!

Lvoe tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Lovley Pea as this gives creedence to the saying "better to have loved..." as only you can do it.

Fee
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Sometimes I feel like this, spinning out of control and crashing into things. Intense write but Great write, Love Bonnie
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
The unhinging - worth the risk? You bet. :) The supernova of love! :) A powerfully penned, thoughtful write, (((Pea))), very well penned.

Stay safe, storms on the way -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
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