You came into my life like
The summer wind
You captured my soul
Made me smile again
You light up my world
You are all I think of
The Lord must have sent
You from up above
We both have been hurt
Our world torn apart
Darling, can I trust you
With my heart?
You came into my life
When I needed you the most
I was only a living shell
A walking ghost
You've given me something to live for
A reason to go on
Hold me my love, 'till all my
Tears are gone
Let me feel your love, may
We never be apart
My darling, can I trust you
With my heart?
This is beautiful and so full of love, Linda. You've captured the essence of love and trust and its importance in a relationship.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Hello Linda,
The last two write are the marvellous one in you list.
Can i trust you ? An important question all ask the lover. The only answer for this question is. Are you true to your love. If you are you win the race. I'm sure you will win the race and you will end up successful in life. Hope you are now with the right man. Wish he give you all trust and all happiness. I'm sure and confidient that man can give you everything. Everything you want .. You can always Trust him with your heart. As long as you are true to him. Your truth matters everytime. When your truth is lost everything is lost. This is what life is and this is what world is ... I am sure you will have a trusted person atleast now. I'm so happy for the past two poems... Congrats for your success in life.
Wish you all happiness ...
TRUST ... IMPORTANT IN LIFE ...
Sanilnath
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Linda, this is a beautiful dedication to a great platonic love. He is so nice. And so are you. Bill
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Linda a most prized token
for the broken chance
of saying I love you
Excelent write.
Peg
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
this was so emotionally sweet and heart touching awesome job on this fatnastic poem
Linda: EXCELLENT write! I know that you can probably guess what I am thinking about this poem but, I will tell you that as your friend,confidant,and just like a sister to me, you know that with me...you can trust me with your heart.I am here for you always darlin'. Our friendship means the world to me and I love you to death sweetie....Ross
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Love,
CJ
The last two write are the marvellous one in you list.
Can i trust you ? An important question all ask the lover. The only answer for this question is. Are you true to your love. If you are you win the race. I'm sure you will win the race and you will end up successful in life. Hope you are now with the right man. Wish he give you all trust and all happiness. I'm sure and confidient that man can give you everything. Everything you want .. You can always Trust him with your heart. As long as you are true to him. Your truth matters everytime. When your truth is lost everything is lost. This is what life is and this is what world is ... I am sure you will have a trusted person atleast now. I'm so happy for the past two poems... Congrats for your success in life.
Wish you all happiness ...
TRUST ... IMPORTANT IN LIFE ...
Sanilnath
for the broken chance
of saying I love you
Excelent write.
Peg
a walking ghost."
*that* was brilliant, that line. Very, very good writing here. Wonderous you are in every way, Linda!!
Sweet and ... sweet ;) write.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Love from India - Joel -
Chrissie
Dee
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$